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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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0 posted 2000-08-20 06:50 PM


Civilization's not for me
Paying high exorbitant rent
Before it's earned, my money's spent
I think I'll go live in that tree

Civilization's not for me
Hoodlums on the corner chill
Between the times they loot and kill
I think I'll barricade that tree

Civilization's not for me
The cops perform another bust
Housing projects turn to rust
I think I'll stay inside that tree

Civilization's not for me
I grow the food I wish to eat
Life is simple, tidy and neat
In my new home inside my tree

Civilization's not for me
Here there is no Internet
No coffee, danish or cigarette
P'raps civilization IS for me


Alicat


As I sit here dimly thinking
Watching modem lights a-blinking
Churning out poetic hash.
Lord, in all Your piety,
Help me keep my sanity:
Please d

© Copyright 2000 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-08-20 08:07 PM


LOL...I guess we have to take the good with the bad! This is cute Ali! Nice to see you posting again!  

Denise

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2 posted 2000-08-20 08:14 PM


Ali--you just need a little electrici--tree?
GROAN...If I keep this up, ya'll gonna be begging me to get depressed again!!!  Cute poem, and that is about how long I stay altruistic myself...hee hee...

Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-08-20 08:16 PM


Oh, and I was just about to entice Merlin from his tree...

well done!

Balladeer
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4 posted 2000-08-20 08:36 PM


Just make sure it's a poet-tree, 'cat. Walt can open up his own branch, too.

Civilization is for people who can't handle chaos.....Alfred E. Neumann

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