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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Depending where you are the moon or sun can light up a star a little wish creates magic near or far nestled on a bed of silver froth or silken rays problems are forgotten as rainbows begin our days dawn comes with the mist retracing all our steps sunshine lifts our hopes as we know we are blessed the moon highlights all our hopes sending shadows back to sleep and so we start our day again with all the faith that's ours to keep.... Keep your magic close to you depend upon it give it life make it true.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
oooooo....I loved this one...beautifully written. How was your b-day by the way....I hope it brought you many riches in smiles and love. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Wonderful line... " sending shadows back to sleep and so we start our day again" -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
RG, "keep your magic close to you". . . love that line. . . and I hope that you do. . . Excellent poem. . .  --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Cindy! I love it! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How I love it when rainbows show their true colors!!.....beautiful, Cindy  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl~ Oh, how I love seeing a 'rainbow' at night ! 'the moon highlights all our hopes sending shadows back to sleep and so we start our day again with all the faith that's ours to keep.... So pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
love this rg....will ditto marge on my favorite part......this lifts my heart |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Cindy this is one stunning piece of work here! This is beauty and hope and magic at it's best! Beautifully stunning! Wow! This sure lifted me this morning ~Hugs~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
enchanting...such a peaceful dreamlike quality |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
enchanting, wonderful, peaceful... truly a rainbow delight... regards, sudhir |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I never let my magic stray too far..... nor do you Cindy.. HuggsZzz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful poem from a beautiful person!!! Great job, RG! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh this is so lovely... the title is very unique.. the poem is enchanting and graceful... love the moon lit imagery... poetry in motion in this jewel of a poem superb RG.... take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is truly beautiful Rainbow Girl what splendid imagery and fullnes of heart it contains. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Cindy--What sweet magic you write here...fills me up with feeling good...thank you. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Oh bless... Thanks guys, you just cheered me up.. HUGS all "If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi RainbowGirl, How these words touch me, what a lot of meaning here. I do have the chills reading these words. Glad I came by. the moon highlights all our hopes sending shadows back to sleep |
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