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bobbi
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 9
USA

0 posted 2000-08-20 02:06 PM




I wonder what you're doing now
And who you're doing it with
You're on my mind so often
And so often I feel like this
I imagine you in front of me
But i'm speechless and out of breath

If I could wrap my arms around you
It still wouldn't be enough
But to smell your hair
And touch your skin
And stay there
Chest to chest
And learn every inch of your body
With my eyes and my caress

I need a new memory of you
Us both speechless
And out of breath
But i'll never dare to let you know
That I want to taste your sweat
And feel myself inside you
Eye to eye
And chest to chest

© Copyright 2000 bobby collins - All Rights Reserved
ladysixstring
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

1 posted 2000-08-20 02:14 PM


Sexy and sweet... enjoyed!!!  I really like the way you phrased this... "I need a new memory of you Us both speechless And out of breath".

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com



ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-08-20 02:24 PM


Amazing how that simple biological function can become so complicated....good writing!
JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
3 posted 2000-08-20 03:49 PM


Wow!!!! Never ceasing to amaze me... You did it again...I will be your eternally devoted fan....IF you promise to keep posting stuff like THIS!!!!  I guess I don't need to tell you I LOVED it...

Julie :)



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-08-20 10:32 PM


wonderfully written and so full of sensuality.  
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2000-08-21 01:00 AM


whoa...someone turn up the a.c.  
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