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Poetry Princess
Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28
Des Moines, IA

0 posted 2000-08-20 11:51 AM


Fallen Angel

I call you fallen angel
you were once so high to me
You loved me from a far
it made me feel so free

The stars had shown much brighter
then they ever had before
And every night I wished upon them
for the angel I adore

Then angel you came home to me
and you loved me for a time
And like you said you'd never do
you broke this heart of mine

So I call you fallen angel
but the faded stars still shine
And I pray I'll find an angel
who'll mend this heart of mine

So good-bye fallen angel
you'll no longer torture me
I've given up on you
and the love you made me see

So to you and your new love
I wish you both the best
And I'll miss you fallen angel
til the day I'm laid to rest

I should not have been so blind
and that I must confess

But I loved you fallen angel
so as I say good-bye I also say God Bless



POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend?

© Copyright 2000 Randi - All Rights Reserved
JnR4eva
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
1 posted 2000-08-20 12:55 PM


This is truly a heartfelt poem here Poetry Princess.  It's so sad and so full of imagery and emotions.  This is a beautiful poem you have here and I'm glad that you shared.

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2000-08-20 01:40 PM


Hi Princess,
You do weave a tale that is very revealing of your heart. Love angel at a distance afar, and then lost, very nicely done. I'm glad I came by to read this.

ladysixstring
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

3 posted 2000-08-20 02:01 PM


"I've given up on you, and the love you made me see"... hard to do... brave strong piece!

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com



Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-08-20 04:05 PM


lovely and sad poem, filled with emotions
ddgoose
Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA
5 posted 2000-08-20 08:05 PM


                                             Fallen Angel

  Beautiful poem and nicely penned.

  didi                                        

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