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Vestiges Evoking (acrostic)
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Vestiges Evoking (acrostic) |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State 
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If tomorrow never comes for me Leaving behind what’s true Outpouring from my soul will be Vestiges of my heart for you Evoking what I never said Yet feelings you already knew Of the most important my love Undying, my love you < !signature--> ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Beautiful and clever... what a combo!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Irie~ What a wonderfully done acrostic ! Very pleasing to read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Wow! You are awsome! This is GREAT ! I am proud! Love, Mom |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent poem in itself..doubly good because of the acrostic! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow Sheri. . . this is great!!! I love it. . . you've done well with this one!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Lady, Marge, Buzz, PdV & Sven.... Many thanks to ALL of you! This was my first attempt at an acrostic. It is much harder than I thought it to be! Whew..... I have much more repsect for those who do them, and do them so well!  I'm glad you enjoyed!  ~Sheri |
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T Member
since 2000-04-27
Posts 107USA |
I like it too... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderfully done... regards, sudhir |
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Tepok Bopar Junior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 27 |
I agree with the others irie, this is very nice indeed. Cheers, Tepok |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Irie, I'm bumping this to the front so others can read it. Wonderfully done. If this is your first attempt at an acrostic Wow. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
T, Sudhir, Tepok & Kethry, Many, many thanks to all of you for your nice replies. And yes Kethry....this was my first attempt at an acrostic. Smiles to you all.... ~Sheri |
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