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Janie
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since 2000-08-13
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0 posted 2000-08-19 11:56 PM


Paradise, a fragile line
Separates the world from thoughts of you
A beach on a moonlit night
A falling cascade to a blue lagoon

There, my past beyond reproach
All fears and foes cast aside
A rampant force drives my heart
Beseeches life, in you abides

Our union found in Paradise
Through seamless truth; understanding
Our love bound by endless faith
The hands of time withstanding

To remain in Paradise
The desire in my heart’s wake
But I leave you with the image
Made to cherish or made to break

Psalm 33:15 "He fashions their hearts individually; He considers all their works."




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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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1 posted 2000-08-20 12:02 PM


Your imagery was awesome...Sensational
poetry~

ladysixstring
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

2 posted 2000-08-20 12:03 PM


You certainly left me witht the image... thanks.

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com



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