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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Spirits of the Quest ~*Marge Tindal*~ White Feather embarks On wisdomed wing of the Owl Great journey at hand Spirit Wolf watches Coming true of great tellings Lone voice cries in night Spirit Bear lumbers Sacred circle grows with pride Legends dance within Ancient Spirits speak Echoes of the Vision Quest Peace lays at my feet Events remembered Brought in unison of voice I need not forget Spirits gathering Pouring into the vessel Tales for me to share Peace awaits the dawn Across the great land sweeping Spirits say it's so And so it must be ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Haiku very much!!! These are great, feathered one!  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* I think these little gems were made for you!! Then you have woven them together...WOW...you are the queen of poetry sweet Marge |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
So beautiful, so true, and so you...and haiku too....Hugs, mom. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very special, Marge. catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I think your ancestors, the great spirit and mother earth are proud of you...this is beautiful! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful and haunting haikus Marge!  I enjoyed the indian feel of these. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ On quest of ancient Words of feathered fluttering Wisdom comes gently <~~~~~> ButterfliesDC~ Gems of wisdom come Searching deep within myself Brought on spirit's wing <~~~~~> Serenity~ True the phrases come Ancient spirits of the tongue Forefathers speaking <~~~~~> CatalinaMoon~ Special moments rare Found within the circled dance Questing at it's best <~~~~~> Krista~ Cherokee rising Spirits on the questing prowl Sharing what they know *Thank you all for knowing when the spirits move me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
This is another one of those peices I would love to see the artwork for. You've painted quite a picture here. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Marge! You are so good at these! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lady6String~ Colors from the past Spirits paint scenario I gaze in wonder <~~~~~> Denise~ They tell the story Of people proud before me I share with good friends *Thank you both~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Special sister friend Pride in loved ones memory Rests in heart of friend Loving kindness comes In understanding of heart Yours touching with mine Ancient spirits tell The circle of dance is you Friendships that are true LOVE YOU, My friend~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ahhh lady you have once again graced us with a picture perfect vision |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How beautiful Marge...Thank you! Love you! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Your talent knows no bounds Marge! Excellent work, again! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Marge This is just magically woven together. I loved it. Very visual Haiku. Sound of the songbird Whispers gently on the wind Music to my ears. I thought I would try my first Haiku on you here. Let me know what you think. This one has probably already been written somewhere, but this is how I felt about what I just read of yours. Garfield |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge-wonderful ribbon of Haikus....you are truely the queen of poetry land. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Visions from the past Cascading to the forefront Bringing spirit thoughts <~~~~~> Martie~ Loving spirits move Among those with hearts of gold Visiting with you <~~~~~> EagleOne~ Visions on recall Bounding across the chasm Heritage heart beats <~~~~~> GGRN~ Magic of the weave Brings spirits close to the heart Waiting for the peace *Your first Haiku is lovely and structured perfectly <~~~~~> MarkB~ Ribbons of delight Dance in the ceremonies Spirits are moving <~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> *My friends, I hold you in the circle of friendship. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW O WOW O WOW WOW O WOW O WOW O WOW SO WOWED I AM LEFT Spirited Indian in a Four-Season delight conquers all our hearts Penning a tribute to this lovely Cherokee gives pleasure and joy student of Haiku newly learning this summer bows to the master ~regards~ = sudhir = |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Spirits offering Multi-dimensional thoughts Wisdom slowly gleaned ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't even know what to say...... |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh wow my friend, another masterpeice. But are you capable of anything else??? I think not. Love ya, Juls |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Absolutely amazing Marge how you tied all of these together....you're a clever little maiden...and don't you forget it!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Marge ... I am simply floored! It's enough that the beautiful words rendered at the onset of this post were exquisite ... but you've by far out-done yourself even further in the responses. Absolutely and most sincerely beautiful my dear friend! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Passing Shadows~ < !signature-->It's time to listen So the spirits enter in Silent reverence <~~~~~> Juliet~ Masters of knowing The true legends of the past Appear before me *My heartfelt appreciation to you both. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ < !signature-->Cherokee Maiden Sits the Vision Quest with pride So much to be gained <~~~~~> Kit~ Words of the spirits From my people come to me I heed peacefulness *My thanks, friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge what you do! |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Marge Another fantastic poem. I just love your writings. Great Job. didi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ The quest of legends Burns within my soul so deep Totally in awe <~~~~~> DD~ Heritage spirits Flow within the well of me I drink thirstily *Please know that I'm appreciative. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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