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Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee

0 posted 2000-08-19 10:43 PM


Looking to the sky...
I see a million wishes
lighting up the night.




--You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.--

© Copyright 2000 Stacy - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 2000-08-19 10:48 PM


I wish I may...
I wish I might...
Have the chance to Tell you ...
what I think tonight...

This is Beautiful work TA~

Balladeer
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2 posted 2000-08-19 10:58 PM


An excellent haiku! wishes and stars,,,the perfect simile")
Sven
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3 posted 2000-08-20 12:45 PM


wishes and stars
kept in mason jars
give us hope and light
and give us dreams tonight

Just wonderful. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-08-20 12:49 PM


TennesseeAngel~

Within sky of night
Wishes winking at us all
What thoughtful delight


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2000-08-20 01:36 AM


A most wonderful picture you have painted here!  

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-08-20 02:50 AM


Beautiful Haiku.  loved the subject of it much.
ladysixstring
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7 posted 2000-08-20 02:56 AM


I'm always glad to see your name pop up on screen!  Wonderful... again!!

-jaimie
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poutprincess
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8 posted 2000-08-21 06:48 AM


loved this!
wonderful!
~Dawn

JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
9 posted 2000-08-22 01:04 AM


loved the way you described every thing about the stars in just a few words!! Beautiful...

Julie :)



JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
10 posted 2000-08-22 01:04 AM


loved the way you described every thing about the stars in just a few words!! Beautiful...

Julie :)



JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
11 posted 2000-08-22 01:05 AM


loved the way you described every thing about the stars in just a few words!! Beautiful...

Julie :)



JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
12 posted 2000-08-22 01:05 AM


loved the way you described every thing about the stars in just a few words!! Beautiful...

Julie :)



Sudhir Iyer
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13 posted 2000-08-22 11:17 AM


~Tennessee Angel~

Beautiful shining ~
A diamond studded blanket
Glows even more now

~regards - sudhir~

Sunshine
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14 posted 2000-08-22 11:22 AM


Million wishes born
through starry starry night's light
born of faith and hope

See what you do, Angel?

Well done!

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