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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia

0 posted 2000-08-19 10:20 PM


Just read this as an after thought ok... long story behind it.

There's No Right Way To Say Goodbye

I don't know how to say I'm sorry
Or if it's going to be easy to look on back
I've got our memories here in my heart
Don't forget my eyes, my face or the times we laughed...

Now it's been such a long beautiful road
That I have traveled with family and friends
Don't cry it's everything that I've dreamed of
I won't be coming back but I'll see you again...

There's no right way to say goodbye
But,  everything has it's place in time
And, when you feel it you'll know and it will set me free
Your strength will be the heaven I wait to see...

I know you'll feel me when the sun dances on water
I'll be that star that's shining it's brightest light
If I had one more day to spend with you
I'd never let the morning turn into night...

But, I'll take with me every single smile
And, everything that ever felt complete
So, don't cry it feels like home
Now there's nothing I fear; God is smiling at me...

There's no right way to say goodbye
But, everything has it's place in time
And, when you feel it you'll know and it will set me free
Your strength will be the heaven I wait to see...

Now the next time we meet
I won't look the same
With golden like wings
Angels my new name...

Let me be blessed with those
Who will walk as they used to
I now found my place
I'm waving back at you...

Saun



Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2000-08-19 10:24 PM


i sure hope this is a "saying goodbye" poem to one person and not EVERYBODY...  

it's lovely verse, really very lovely  

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-08-19 10:29 PM


You aren't leaving us?  I hope not...and I'd really like to send this to someone as an example of how to do this nicely...smiles Saun...you stick around, okay?
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-08-19 10:29 PM


You aren't leaving us?  I hope not...and I'd really like to send this to someone as an example of how to do this nicely...smiles Saun...you stick around, okay?
Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
4 posted 2000-08-19 10:51 PM


Serenity, No,I'm not leaving. I just haven't felt well in a long time. It's hard to explain. But, I'm glad you liked the poem.   Thanks for reading it.

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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