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Morning Storm (tanka)
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Morning Storm (tanka) |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Dark, striated sky interwoven blue and grey, threaded by lightning. Heavenly seamstress at work sewing patterns in the clouds. jk What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, this is so lovely Can you tell me what a tanka is I'd love to try it The result is beautiful, at least when written by you Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jonnak~ A lovely verse ... the Tanka format works wonderfully here. You've written a beauty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
This is gorgeous. What beauty in the sky it brings to mind. Juls |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Joannak, this is lovely. I also really enjoy a storm. Thank you for posting this inspiration. INclan |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Joannak, this is a fine piece of work...bumping this up so that others can appreciate its beauty  |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Thank you all for reading. Thanks to kaile for bumping, I was pleasantly surprised to see it again. As far as me giving instruction on this form, I found a great site at: netpoets.com/pip/Forum27/HTML/001723.html I wish I could remember which poet here put me on to this site, but I cannot. I would suggest a venture to this site, is a keeper. Thanks to all, Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Lovely poem!!!!! |
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