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One Poem. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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One poem That's all I want to write One poem That will take away this night One poem To tell you of my heart One poem But where love do I start? One poem To take away this pain One poem A final, loving refrain One poem to leave behind One poem that will remind A poem that will sing Of the love that I bring One poem, a burning flame One poem, never the same A poem from my soul My love, for you to hold One poem this Knight gives To the heart for which I live This poem is my life I offer to you, my light One poem Before you walk away One poem You who brighten my day One poem Before this love dies One poem Before my heart cries One poem For you. . . One poem It's all I can do I write. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven, you write with the elegance of a true Knight, and if you give her that one poem from your heart, she will only beg for more!! Beautiful thoughts from you, my friend........ Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
From this I get the sense that the author feels his poetry is his only chance of expressing his emotions... and the confidence to know... it will only take one. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'd like to write one too!!!  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I think you said it all with just this "One Poem" Sven. The one who holds your heart will be a lucky lady indeed. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is just beautiful Sven!! Any lady would count herself lucky to have such a verse penned for her! Wonderful!  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, To compose that one poem of the heart, that one missive from the soul...the one to make all the difference to your love. Do write, my friend... This is beautiful and so very "you" ~ ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven, I have to agree with Marina.The lady that nabs you is gonna be very lucky. Be prepared to write for her continuously, hehe. This had it all, jammed packed with romance. Juls |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . Sunny1. . .I have yet to find that "One Poem", but I will continue to try. . . thank you. . . ladysixstring, my writing is all that I have. . . and all that I am. . . thanks. . . deVine, I know that you will!! Marina, I don't know. . . I just don't know. . . thank you my friend. . . TA, thank you so much! Your words are always welcome!! Claire, thank you my friend. . . I know that I will someday. . . Juls. . .thanks!! And I don't know about "Lucky"! But if you say so!!  Thank you again. . .------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ One poem to last a lifetime One chance to pen the day One poem to touch a heart Within your thoughtful way One poem to impress upon another heart in waiting One chance to find the love your heart is anticipating One poem from the Sven Given with romantic telling One poem from your heart within another heart dwelling *Sven-meister .... No one does it better than you ! It's such a part of who you are. What a pleasure to read your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Sven This one read very well. It flowed off my tongue. I loved it. As they say in the sports world "Your the Man" Garfield |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, I agree with Poet deVine, nice job. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marge, thank you for your words. . . they were wonderful! ggrn3, I don't know that "I'm the man" LOL. . . but thank you!! Sy, as always my friend. . . thank you. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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