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Wrong Damn Airport!
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Wrong Damn Airport! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Wrong Damn Airport! Arriving late as usual, my fifteen minute fatal flaw, chiding myself, parking forty miles from home, pulling my daughter’s hand, come on, come, we’re late, I say the non-international terminal half empty, looking for your smiling face but there are no familiar features, no such flight number on this or any other airline. So what dimension had taken you? Did you accidentally fly To Bermuda to be trapped by the triangle? Where the HELL are you??? Becomes my mantra as no phone can reach you driving forty miles back my daughter patiently waiting to be fed dinner, finally you call, screaming where the HELL are you? © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
gripping!!! from the first line to the last... and then the tables are turned on the last line... WOW regards, sudhir |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
ROFL.........this seems to be the theme of my day!!  Great work!~ |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Been there, done that, hid my face. Corinne, this one had me grinning from start to finish...very well crafted. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Corrine, my heart is pouding my palms sweaty this is the kind of thing I would go. I have made so many mistakes when I first started travelling trains on my own to college, thankfully it is not as bad as airports, and American ones are huge. I know that I would get totally lost...LOL. Wonderful poem, excellently written. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Perhaps not funny to you .... or him ...... roaring with giggles here ! !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Sudhir! It is funny now, but last night we were both angry and frustrated! Butterflies, the way it turned out, we're not sure who to blame (my friend flew to the wrong airport, but we never actually discussed WHICH aiport!), so we agreed to both walk away whistling like nuthin happened! Thanks, Alicat - whew, what an exhausting lesson in communication that was! Brian, in the future I may be required to do some travelling for work. As I anxiously paced through the airport looking for my friend, it occurred to me that I might not be the travelling kind! Well, Marge, we weren't laughing last night, but he did admit this morning that when I told him that he had the wrong airport (its the one close to where I used to live) and I reminded him of where I now live, it was like being punched in the gut and he could no longer be mad at me. I could no longer be mad at him since we never discussed WHICH airport, but I ASSumed that he knew where I lived! LOL - what a mess! Corinne |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
LOL Oh, how terrible. *S* -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ohhhhhhh.....I hope you kissed and made up after you found the right airport!! I can see where this could easily happen......you wrote this so well that I almost heard him yelling!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Love this C,.... humor and class... thanks for sharing this experience so perfectly jm |
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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
I enjoyed this.....hope it never happens to me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Corrine shame on you...perhaps an auto pilot would deliver you to the right one..ha..ha.. I have been late on lots of dates and made some women very angry...sometimes I'm late to work...don't tell my boss...but I would never be late getting to the airport...or go to the wrong one...I could not stand the stress...James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL...afraid to say, been there, done that |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Corinne - it all comes together now! The picture of you, the hair, the wistful smile.... yep - The plane is ready to fly, but the pilot isn't on board. That poor friend of yours - that'll teach him to assume that knowing where you used to live is lots more important that knowing where you live now! lol - Just kidding, as anybody who can write as well as you must be a brilliant person. |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
ROFL......I have actually DONE this!!! Very entertaining |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, great piece, I could see you wondering around the airport. I hate going to the Toronto airport, three terminals, you have to know exactly which one to go to to pick up your friends. Park |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
With no one to meet, there's no need to specify... even though I now live in a city with 3 airports. *S* Great poem, Corinne!!! Glad you can smile about it today! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Opps miscommunication! Yipes I don't know who's to fault but that is what makes these relationships so interesting...something to laugh about later....meanwhile please feed that little girl...just joking..obviously I am not taking this as serious as I should. Hope we hear from you again! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh My goodness, Corinne...I am so frustrated for you...I can just imagine..you wrote it all out so well...sigh..and two laughing now..so glad! Communication is everything!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTFLMAO - so glad you kissed and made up! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks everyone for reading and commenting! What a night that was! LOL Corinne |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ohmygawd, I would have absolutely panicked! ROFLMAO This is just hysterical!! I'm sure you weren't laughing at the time though! LOL Airports suck - if I do have to get near one, I make darn sure I'm prepared and know where I'm going etc.! This was a great read! |
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