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No Matter What People Say
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No Matter What People Say |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
No Matter What People Say After caring for someone for so long It's hard to stand on my own and be strong But starting a relationship with someone new Is simply somthing I am not yet ready to do But why doesn't anyone seem to understand I miss the gentle touch of his hand Knowing he was there for me And thinking he would always be Someone I could trust and count on Even if I called him at the brake of dawn He loved me for who I am And that takes a lot for a man He always knew what I was feeling And even helped with the healing I miss the fun things we did Just being goofy and acting like a kid I can't erase all the memories I hold inside But yet I can't forget the tears that I've cried I miss him each and every day And I will always love him no matter what people say |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Well, if he walked away then he obviously didn't... "He loved me for who I am". But this piece leaves the "reason(s)" open... where did he go? Why? Was it by choice? Tragedy? I'm left wondering. Very nice job. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions! Settle in, enjoy yourself and make some new friends. Please check your email for a special message.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Princess, you're right. . . no one can tell you what to feel. . . and even though you let go. . . even though it's over, you still can't help but think about them. . . it's just natural. . . only you know your feelings. . . This is a wonderful poem. . . welcome!!! And please stay for a while!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Princess What a wonderful piece for your opening post. And your right. Live your on life and never let what people say affect you in any negative way. Your poem shows that there was a strong bond and I'm like Ladysixstring; I'm left wondering. Great poem. Welcome to Passions. Garfield |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A beautiful entrance to Passions! Welcome and I look forward to reading much more from you~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Wow...this is a wonderful piece you've posted here, though I'm sorry for your pain. Welcome to Passions and I hope you find may friends and hope here!  ~Sheri |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions Thank you for sharing this, it was a wonderful poem. It has a great use of emotion I miss him each and every day And I will always love him no matter what people say |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
very emotional is this piece...you put your heart into this and it is very evident..I espcecially liked the last two lines...how they hurt ...but stay strong and welcome to passions...I can't wait to read more "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Poetry Princess... Always hold onto your memories, no matter what the people say......this is such a beautiful poem, and bittersweet, but written with your heart. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful thoughts...painful memories seem to be so strong but there does come a time when beautiful memories come forward and it is a tender time...I know what you mean..after losing a four year relationship I miss the companionship...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welp. I've been there, done it...and I can say that there's also the reverse side of the coin in that once you've been alone so long, you have a hard time letting go of YOU, and giving to someone else. So I don't know which is better. |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
I want to say thank you to everyone who wrote back and got a chance to read one of my poems. I enjoy righting in my free time but this is the first that I will be posting in or even letting others read it. I am glad you all liked it and I am excited to read writing from all of you. Thanks again Randi POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful way to make an entrance to Passions. Look forward to more of yours. WELCOME.....!!!!!!! |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
ok first off Welcome! i loved the poem...very emotional and honest looking forward to more Tony |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
sorry i have taken so long to welcome you to passions! i look forward to reading more of your "heart"..  .... i enjoyed this one and im sure i will enjoy the many more to come!~Dawn |
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