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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 2000-08-18 10:51 PM


I love the way you make me smile
every time I see you
so charming, happy, warm inside
and always there to be true

No matter how I feel that day
whatever's on my mind
you always know just what to say
my smile you always find

No matter if I'm strong or weak
you're right there with a hug
and kiss upon my chin or cheek
you always show your love

You laugh, you smile, you cheer me up
with the sweetest playfulness
you giggle and tickle my spirits up
you're just so good at this!  

You're cartoons and candy and big tedi-bears
you're cuteness and tenderness too
you're one of the few that just truly cares
when others just have'nt a clue

I just want to thank you for being that friend
that overcharged bundle of joy  
and showing that you'll always stay 'till the end
our friendship I do so enjoy  

I love ya with all my heart, babe!!   {{{KISSES}}}

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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ladysixstring
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

1 posted 2000-08-19 12:33 PM


Hmmm, I can see you reading this poem to someone very dear and special to you as their heart melts, with each line, all over the floor... bring wet wipes... it could get messy.  So beautiful and loving.  BTW "you giggle and tickle my spirits up" is absolutely adorable.

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com



Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
2 posted 2000-08-19 03:39 AM


Awww....really awww....I liked this one very much. I love poems about friendship or letting someone know how special they are. This is terrific!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-08-19 08:56 AM


Friends make the world go round...your poem has me "spinning"    what a beautiful gift to your friend, thank you for sharing it for all to see~
Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
4 posted 2000-08-19 10:59 AM


Beautifully written, looks like you might be getting off the bridge of sighs. A beautiful and loving gift to give a friend.  
Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 64
Fitchburg Ma, USA
5 posted 2000-08-19 12:31 PM


aww...it's really nice toward someone you love. I'm only 17 but hey what the hell I'm supoesed to fall in love.     ~Fairy~
Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
6 posted 2000-08-19 12:48 PM


This is perfect! I felt as if I was reading my own thoughts!
Thanks so much for sharing this...I'm going to forward this to a friend, if you don't mind!

~*Irie leaves with a smile*~


~Sheri

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
7 posted 2000-08-20 09:12 PM


ladysixstring ~ One never knows about that...    lol  She would'nt be the only one. LOL  Thank you  

Saunni ~ Thank you so much for your kind words.

Butterflies_dont_cry ~ Yes they do... I'm glad I could do that to you    If you get dizzy and sick, dont be afraid to e-mail me and give me a hard time   lol  Thank you.

Marsha ~ Bridge of sighs?  Is this a good or bad place??   LOL  Thank you.

Irie ~ Thank you so much... No, I dont mind  

ddgoose
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA
8 posted 2000-08-20 09:25 PM


ThUnDeRkYsS

"No matter how I feel that day
whatever's on my mind
you always know just what to say
my smile you always find"

Your words are so lovely and true.  I will come back for more of your poems!

didi



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2000-08-20 09:34 PM


NICE WORK, THUNDER! It reminds me of one I wrote...

Smile

let loose that smile
don't worry, I'll catch it,
but if you don't let go
I'll tickle you and snatch it

and if I can't get it
by the bottom of your feet
or your ribs or tummy
then I'll yank you from your seat
I will take you in my arms
put the mistletoe above you
kiss you smack-dab on your hidden smile
and tell you that I love you

and if that doesn't work
if that still ain't right
I'll rip your clothes off
and start a pillow fight
and we'll make love hard at first
and then slow it to a creep
and satisfied, you'll drift off
I know you smile in your sleep  


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~shadows dance by the light within~



[This message has been edited by passing shadows (edited 08-20-2000).]
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
10 posted 2000-08-21 06:31 PM


ddgoose ~ Thank you  

passing shadows ~ Thank you very much... Your poem is wonderful!!    This puts a great big smile on MY face as I read it! LOL  So, you knew how to find it too...  

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
11 posted 2000-08-21 06:44 PM


any time, cutie  
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
12 posted 2000-08-22 10:45 AM


Well uh...this is a little uh "sweet" for me - but very nice anyways!  How nice to have someone so "bubbly" in your life!    That extra "energy" is nice at times, I do agree!  I try to surround myself with upbeat people, as they are so much nicer to be around!  ROFL  Thumbs up on all your happy sappy poems sir!  

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
13 posted 2000-08-22 06:21 PM


passing shadows ~  

pff ~ Thank you, Thank you!!!    I always enjoy hearing from you  

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
14 posted 2000-08-22 11:14 PM


this was a poem filled with such joy and happiness really brings a smile! smiles are catching as you know so when you read this just so you'll know ( i'm  

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
15 posted 2000-08-23 06:23 PM


Rosebud1229 ~ Thank you... knowing I made made you   makes me   LOL
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