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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-08-18 07:08 PM


So this is me.
It's how I am.
No one ever
understands.

I have always
been this way...
and always
this way I will stay.

Avoid the think
Avoid the cry,
flip the page
that screams of "why"....

"Patterns?"
He is unconvinced.
And wonders
at coincidence.

In a rage,
he swiped at fly...
and in dismay,
the white dove flies...
a lesson to remember...

cry...

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-08-18 07:12 PM


~I try.~
Now I cry.
S,...this one has reached me.
Please accept my huggy.
Take care of you.
*Peace.


*Ok,...huggy??? What's up with that? How 'bout hug? Could never tell I work with children could ya!?!

[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 08-18-2000).]

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
2 posted 2000-08-18 07:29 PM


sensitivity -
some men  are a long time learning it -
some never do -
live with it -
or leave
may be your only choices -

you touched me with this - heard you loud and clear



serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-08-18 09:15 PM


hi there....

just a 'toddlin' meself along...

Spitfire---somehow I knew you would understand...warm heart hugs....thank you...

and Wilfred--that was such a lovely!  I thank you much me friend!

Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
4 posted 2000-08-18 09:53 PM


What a wonderful poem... yet sad.  May peace find your heart, and stay forever more.

"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper."
Eden Phillpotts
*Cassandra Roseen*

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2000-08-18 09:57 PM


Serenity~
Tenderly read and understood ...

We are all privy to our tears ...
when they fall for someone we love ...
someone we've hurt ...
someone we've lost ...
or most often ... for ourselves !

*Hugs from here !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Sven
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6 posted 2000-08-18 10:02 PM


my friend. . . I know the tears you cry. . .

simply you. . .

-------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-08-18 11:08 PM


So this is me.
It's how I am.
No one ever
understands.

I have always
been this way...
and always
this way I will stay.
====================

i understand ... from a place so deep it only sees light cast by poetry.

cry, baby...they cant have our tears..
or our poetry...

"this is what it sounds like ...when doves cry."

love you s'en...
me


Balladeer
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8 posted 2000-08-18 11:26 PM


Serenity, you have said so much in so few words here. What you are should be enough for any man  
ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
9 posted 2000-08-18 11:49 PM


Serenity
I agree with Balladeer.  Remain strong and continue to express yourself through such exceptional writing.

Garfield

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2000-08-19 09:41 PM


Thanks to me friends for the heartwarming replies...and Michael, for that one comment alone--well, let's just say nobody better mess with me Balladeer!!!  Hugs to you all.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
11 posted 2000-08-19 11:10 PM


Oh girl......your tears are all over this
poem....the ones from your heart not your
eyes...**angel wing hugs** to you...for they
ask nothing in return.  Beautifully
expressed and heartfelt~

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