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I Live To Love
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I Live To Love |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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And so it goes another day another love to cast away... another memory pinned to wall-- another fool-- I've had them all. Dismissed, am I-- under-estimated... but I will not count tears as wasted... every one was wall undone, each drop a silver of my soul... each prayer for you unmeasured gold... a feast before you left untasted. And no, you should not count me out... I've forty years of rage to shout... and unlike you, I take my pain, ease scorch of sun with tears of rain... I will not lock myself away. I live to love another day. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
a well penned verse of self worth...kudos poet |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, sweet Serenity~ 'you should not count me out...' 'I live to love another day.' YES !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
And so you will, serenity, live to love another day. I like the hope I see in this one. Well done. Michael |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Serenity... Never give up! I like this statement you've made with this piece! Keep the "chin up" attitude!  ~*More Hugs*~ ~Sheri |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
each drop a silver of my soul... each prayer for you unmeasured gold... a feast before you left untasted. .. And no, you should not count me out... .. I will not lock myself away. I live to love another day. ------ Ah great words from the serene one... lovely work... regards, sudhir |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
would that we all could live this way my friend. . . would that we all. . . thank you. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh yes! A woman with strength and attitude! I loved it!  --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Well done Good to see you stand strong Rich |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And no, you should not count me out... I've forty years of rage to shout... and unlike you, I take my pain, ease scorch of sun with tears of rain... I will not lock myself away. I live to love another day. ====================== damn straight me twin .. hard learned lessons...I know ... only we have the key... * blowing kisskiss to the south tonite* me |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I THOUGHT there was some feistiness beneath that calm exterior. You go, girl!!!! |
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