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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-08-18 01:25 PM

Magic in your words
bypassed by worlds unknown
Magic in your ways
of only you I need
But then you zap me
with your spell
of torment by your words
Somehow now I can't even tell
what it was that I needed from you
in the beginning.

How can a magic disappear?
It seemed so near
but now is far away.
That magic act was quite
an act for me
The way you tipped your hat
and only you did pour
such magic into my soul
How can a magic disappear
that seemed so near
seeping into my veins
of this I'll have to reframe
a picture that I had made of me and
you.
Poof goes the candles
poof goes the flames
poof goes the magic
which flickers in my veins.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-08-18 01:38 PM

"of this I will have to reframe a picture that I had made of me and you"

I never quite thought of it that way...a picture to reframe when things go wrong...but how appropriate...liked this muchly

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-08-18 01:48 PM

Paula I guess what I'm trying to say is sometimes we do make a picture of how we would like things to be when the picture hasn't been taken to begin with.. thx for reply

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2000-08-18 01:49 PM

Poofie, and nice!

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-08-18 01:52 PM

thank you sunshine for some reason I keep thinking of puff the magic dragon! lol

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

5 posted 2000-08-18 02:35 PM

Poof. I like.
I love how you make reference to a dispearing love through the poofs.

Garfield

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

6 posted 2000-08-19 12:49 PM

thx ggrn I do think sometimes it seems that way in a flash it's gone.

ladysixstring
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 374

7 posted 2000-08-19 01:50 AM

What a fantastic line... "of this I will have to reframe a picture that I had made of me and you"... our memory (the events) stay the same but sometimes our way of looking at them change. Wonderful!!

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2000-08-19 02:58 AM

(of this I'll have to reframe
a picture that I had made of me and
you.) This line was totally cool! I loved this. Great work!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

9 posted 2000-08-19 07:07 PM

thank you sauni and ladysixstring, so many times I guess we try to make things remain the same yet constantyly right before our eyes they change.

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

10 posted 2000-08-19 07:27 PM

Rosebud, this is outstanding. So much said here.
Juls

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

11 posted 2000-08-20 03:28 PM

thanks so much Juliet, I guess it kind of felt like poof! So I tried to put it in words that are sometimes so hard to write..

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