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Quinella’s Dream, Quinella’s Wish [Part II]

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Quinella’s Dream, Quinella’s Wish [Part II]

O maman
he came

he came to me last eventide

last eventide

behind Moon’s mask of
light

O maman
I weep I weep

tender did thy touch
touch deep

Knight’s raiment
of darkest cloth
hid his virtues well

or did Wizard
cast thy spell

compelled was I to awaken
and pinch myself true

to know Knight’s arms
bound me

O maman
I weep I weep

and stare forward
to the darkness

to slumber

o maman
would that he
come
again….



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Sudhir Iyer
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O WOW
O WOW
O WOW

Thanks a lot...
it feels great to be out from a loop

O WOW
O WOW
O WOW

(oops I am in another loop now  )
(part 3, where are you?)


regards,
sudhir
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Three shall come...

and thank you!
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oh thank you thank you so much.  These dreams of yours are so exquisite and the format is simply awesome.  So is there gonna be a part three?  Back to my corner I go.......(patiently)   now I see you were here at the same time as me so I will await part three.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-18-2000).]
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Mark, sit thee in thy patience's corner...
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Wonderful format... you really "set the scene".  I truly enjoy your style here!!

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...I thinks ya peeking! Ma'mam!
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Sunshine. . .

This just keeps getting better and better. . . even reading it backwards!!!  

Just wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Lady, Alle', Sven, thank you all...so much fun to write...
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Let's keep them rising, shall we.  
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The Knight has arrived through eagerness and meaning, or pushed by the Wizard. We shall see. Damn good stuff here.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

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