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Quinella’s Dream, Quinella’s Wish [Part II]
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Quinella’s Dream, Quinella’s Wish [Part II] |
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Sunshine
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Quinella’s Dream, Quinella’s Wish [Part II] O maman he came he came to me last eventide last eventide behind Moon’s mask of light O maman I weep I weep tender did thy touch touch deep Knight’s raiment of darkest cloth hid his virtues well or did Wizard cast thy spell compelled was I to awaken and pinch myself true to know Knight’s arms bound me O maman I weep I weep and stare forward to the darkness to slumber o maman would that he come again…. Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O WOW O WOW O WOW Thanks a lot... it feels great to be out from a loop O WOW O WOW O WOW (oops I am in another loop now  )(part 3, where are you?) regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Three shall come... and thank you! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
oh thank you thank you so much. These dreams of yours are so exquisite and the format is simply awesome. So is there gonna be a part three? Back to my corner I go.......(patiently) now I see you were here at the same time as me so I will await part three. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, sit thee in thy patience's corner... |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Wonderful format... you really "set the scene". I truly enjoy your style here!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
 ...I thinks ya peeking! Ma'mam! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine. . . This just keeps getting better and better. . . even reading it backwards!!!  Just wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lady, Alle', Sven, thank you all...so much fun to write... |
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Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Let's keep them rising, shall we. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The Knight has arrived through eagerness and meaning, or pushed by the Wizard. We shall see. Damn good stuff here. ~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~ |
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