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Gentle Dawn
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Gently on the dawn Today's promise meets the morn Lights up a new day ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge... Haiku Goddess.... so beautiful... Now I have to learn how to haiku... I feel so left out... regards, sudhir |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Marge this is exquisite. I gotta echo Sudhir, I wanna learn how to haiku also. Take care, Juls |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Drifting through clear skies Marge Tindal's message we see Assure shades of love  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
*Beautiful* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Marge how lovely this is! What a hopeful haiku! You've penned it well. Please share more with us (You're still the queen of poetry, maybe I should name you the queen of haikus as well)Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
exquisite |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay okay...nuff is enuff...I am going to learn to do these if'n I have to sell tha darn horse to do it. You are amazing dear one. Beautiful Haiku |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Morning sun brings friends Shining in the heart of me Welcome to my morn Juliet~ Soft rays of the day Fall gently on friend's shoulder Leaving smiles aglow Rex~ On day of splendor Good friends gather specialness Hugged close to the heart Mike~ Beautiful the thoughts Resting in the heart of friends My day glows with you Melissa~ So sweet are the thoughts Just the honey of a bee To make my face smile Paula~ Exquisite are friends Shining on the day so bright Enough of a glow ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i work in advertising... we often say, "less is more"... you have proven that with three short lines filled with imagery... your poem is a painting... very well done, Marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ Sell that blasted horse ! Let's ride away on sunbeams Soft hoofprints of light ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, Soothing and hopeful... Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Nature paints the dawn Across the sky of morning I surmise - awesome ! Michael~ Hope rises at dawn Tackles a new objective Rests when day is done ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Simple and Lovely Marge weaves waves and wands all 'round singularly great [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Marge So simple, yet excellent work. I wished to learn more about the Haiku also. Email me some suggestions or pointers. Garfield |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Of shortened versions Your friendly haikus to each Speak true from your heart I always love your responses, Marge... ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine~ Magic wand aglow Sending pixie dust around Hope some falls on you GGRN~ Grin upon my haeart Launches smiling reaction Lands upon your face Maureen~ So easy to do Verses come in bunches true Sent from me to you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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