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Mel2Lizz
Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 20
Alamosa, Colorado

0 posted 2000-08-18 06:55 AM


Would you--
Would you kiss me?
Would you hug me?
Would you make love to me?
Would you show me things I've never seen?
Would you shoe me true love?
Would you take me to the ends of the world?
Would you make me laugh?
Would you show me that you cry?
Would you love me endlessly?
Would you hold all time still for me?

I would--
I would kiss you.
I would hug you.
I would make love to you.
I would show you things you've never seen before.
I would show you true love.
I would take you to the ends of the world.
I would make you laugh.
I would show you that I cry.
I would love you endlessly.
I would hold all time still for you.

If only--All wounds could come true...


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Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2000-08-18 07:44 PM


Hi Mel2Lizz,
Nice writing that you have done. My answer:   If you would then I would. Glad that I came by.

Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
2 posted 2000-08-18 07:49 PM


Sometimes it would even be nice just to know the answers to these questions.
Would you if you Could?
Nice thoughts that you've posted here....
And Welcome to Passions  




~Sheri

ggrn3
Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
3 posted 2000-08-18 08:06 PM


"If only--All woulds could come true..."
Listen, if there is a "will" there may be a way for a would to come true. LOL

Garfield

ladysixstring
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

4 posted 2000-08-18 08:41 PM


Clever format... different.  I enjoyed this.

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com



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