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Erase My Eyes
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Erase My Eyes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There is nothing now. No hope. No dream. Nothing but the truth of me. Nothing, nothing, everything, to heave the sobs of hours' weep... And if my God would hear my plea, I'd spend hours on my knees, if pennies make a wish come true, a well of copper just for you... If I could stop my eyes from weep, If I could rest--if I could sleep, oh someone dream a dream for me, erase my eyes, erase the blue... Hold me. Love me. Make me new. Tonight I'd die, to feel at ease...... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ouch.... so sad O Serene One, is everything alright? I hope so... take care, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ In this sad little piece ... look what I found ! ! 'if pennies make a wish come true, a well of copper just for you...' What a little gem of a line ! Keep wishing, Hon !  Love ya'... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"And if my god would hear my plea, I'd spend hours on my knees." I once thought that if I prayed hard enough and long enough, God would answer my prayer. Then I realized that God was listening to her prayer also...I was praying to get her back and she was praying to go on...sometimes God knows what is best because he see's the whole picture...just something that happened in my life...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
it would serve no point to erase your eyes ... for it 'tis in your heart-- where your vision lies. gifted poet... all here--hears your plea. prayers for healing peace ... prayers for sweet serenity. ************** love you me twin ... hugs for my baby girl... take care of you for me...okay me [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you have some great lines in here... this piece is a treasure... your writing gets better and better..... i love this one! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Serenity this is so sad and yet so lovely. Best wishes, Juls |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all---and sudhir, I am fine, sweetie---I appreciated everyone's kindness and concern...hugs to all. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Fantastic line... "a well of copper just for you..." so clever!!! The title really caught my interest. So hopeless but I enjoyed it very much. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You have touched a hurting heart...sad yet with that little glimmer of hope. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So glad to hear you are ok....your longing for peace and the overwhelming sadness pulls at every being of my heart. Beautiful but haunting plea for help and peaceful sleep. |
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