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A Stream of You
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A Stream of You |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A Stream of Youpour over me a stream of you broil into me this dream of you sleep beside me serene, we two wake wrapped in me your need, renew I'll drown under sounds surrounding you drenched in the flood of loving's dew and drink of the cream our tender brew if you will pour over me a stream of you |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Oh my gracious... 'tis a bit warm in here. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...makes me want to go fer a swim |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh my pour soul!!! This one's a beauty, Claire!!! |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"a stream of you." This one is so pretty, Claire. Michael |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is absolutely breathtaking Claire...wow the feeling in this piece is beautiful!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Claire ... you'd better issue fire extinguishers with this one  |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
What a beautiful combination these words make!!! "if you will pour over me a stream of you" -jaimie http://www.ladysixstring.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you all...it was a long, warm night. Had to do something. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ This is just lovely ... You did something sooooo well ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You certainly did something with this, it's fabulous!! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Claire, my goodness, what can I say that the others haven't? Simply gorgeous. Juls |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I have come to expect such lovely verse N rhyme when I see your name posted on line .. I read this one and again my lashes flutter at the expression you pen Fanning herself with a smileRegards Coco |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow Claire--this is so visually sensual. A lovely warm poem! |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
Melting in your words...I could ease be poured at this moment. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Miss Marge, I am smiling with the sweetness of your words...thank you Eagle One, thank you... I hope that what I did with it was alright. Thank you for letting me know you think so. juliet_2u, I thank you, sincerely. Coco, perhaps I did get a bit warm with my words... thank you for the kindness of yours. Martie... Warm...my sentiments, exactly. Thanks Knight Dreams, thank you for reading and letting me know that you enjoyed this little poem. I don't believe you and I have met, so please allow me to welcome you to Passions. I hope you're feeling at home here. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Claire, simply you. . . that's all. . . just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Claire! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven...and your thoughtful response is simply you...wonderful. Thank you. Denise, again I thank you for reading and taking time to give such encouragement. You're so kind. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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