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Will You Wait For Me
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Will You Wait For Me |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
It may take a while... for this broken heart to mend. It may be some time... before it learns to trust again. ~I'm not sure when~ Trusting fool I was... to simply give my heart away. Without pause to think... that he may not intend to stay. ~For healing, I pray~ I hope you are patient... for the process may be long. I think you may be the one... who restores my soul and song. ~I know I can't be wrong~ I don't know how long... it takes to heal a severed heart. Maybe just a day or two... and I can have a brand new start. ~I can offer you a part~ Time can heal all wounds... I guess we'll wait and see. But I simply can not tell... how extensive the damage may be. ~Will you wait for me~ I'm not sure when. For healing, I pray. I know I can't be wrong. I can offer you a part. Will you wait for me.... --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Tennessee Angel Not ready for a relationship. Good things come in time. Waiting won't hurt if the relationship will be rewarding and fulfilling for both parties. I would wait for a person like this if they could express themselves as good as you did in this work. Very good. Garfield |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Tennessee Angel: "It may take a while... for this broken heart to mend. It may be some time... before it learns to trust again. ~I'm not sure when" Great pen - the words flowed beautifully with tons of meaning and truth. It takes a long time to get over a broken heart. didi |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tennessee Angel, if they care about you. . . they will wait. . . Wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Hey, gal !  I see hope in this piece. '~I can offer you a part~' When you're ready ... someone will fix that heart ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Tennessee Angel... There was a good message here! It's not always good to jump right in, and if love is meant to be, than time doesn't matter. Great job!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Angel, any man worth his salt would say yes for you  |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Garfield - You are simply too sweet! Thank you for your kind reply! didi -- A long time indeed!! Thanks for reading! Ah, dear Sven! -- Always something thoughtful to say. I love to look at the responses and see your name. Thank you so much!! Marge -- If no one else in the world reads my work, I can always count on you! Thanks girl!! Sunny -- Thank you for always being so encouraging. It means a lot because I so enjoy everything that you write! Thanks a bunch! |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
'Deer -- You snuck in on me there! You make me blush. I hope you're worth your salt then, sir. lol |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I do not know the why and how of the reason why I had not read any of your works for a long time since the last one that I had read.... But now that I have got around reading this one... I am spellbound... ------- Time can heal all wounds... I guess we'll wait and see. But I simply can not tell... how extensive the damage may be. ~Will you wait for me~ I'm not sure when. For healing, I pray. I know I can't be wrong. I can offer you a part. Will you wait for me.... -------- Wonderful writing indeed... regards, sudhir |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you touched this heart today with both posts - you are on my must read list now~S~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Sudhir -- That is so sweet of you! I have read everything that you have posted and your talent simply astounds me. Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Wilfred -- A must read?!? Wow, that's a compliment and a half. I do so appreciate a comment like that from a poet of your caliber. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Angel...this is very nice and very touching. Yes, I will wait. |
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