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On The Edge Of Love
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On The Edge Of Love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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The breath that blows hot breezes on my cheek, the happiness of this invaded heart, the long black hair across the scented sheets I drift in solace blessed in arms. The giving touch, sharing tenderness the cantus firmus on the placid air the pleasing richness of the liquid rest the hidden joys that suddenly appear. The mystic sound of scores on high across my heart strings flying doves the sheltered trust once more revived a gentle moment on the edge of love. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
ethome--this is so sweet and tender and the sensuality is overpowering. You make me yearn to be close to the one I love right now and if I could she would be right where you descibe. Beautiful work and greatly appreciated.  |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
You've made the rough "edge's of love" seem so smooth..... Thank-you. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Ethome Great work. I'm speechless. Garfield |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Mark I appreciate your comments.. I have come to realize that you are such a dedicated poet..write on my friend..you are doing a wonderful job. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
nice work here, ethome ... nice flow ... i like it |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
Elegance....with a wonderful title. Lovely lovely work |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The mystic sound of scores on high across my heart strings flying doves the sheltered trust once more revived a gentle moment on the edge of love. ===================== E, this is so tender and gentle sensually lovely... love it...muchly  JM ********* I want to rock your gypsy soul Just like way back in the days of old Then magnificently we will float into the mystic And when that fog horn blows you know I will be coming home And when thst fog horn whistle blows I got to hear it I don't have to fear it I want to rock your gypsy soul Just like way back in the days of old And together we will float into the mystic Come on girl... ~Into The Mystic~ Van Morrison |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"invaded heart" ~ what an imaginative, endearing piece of poetry, this. So enjoyed. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Passionate, innocent, erotic... all rolled into one toe tingling piece. -jaimie http://www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the happiness of this invaded heart, .. I drift in solace blessed in arms. .. The mystic sound of scores on high across my heart strings flying doves the sheltered trust once more revived a gentle moment on the edge of love. ...... Marvelous seems to be an apt word to describe the beauty of this poem... Ethome, as many times already you have done it again... penned a majestic poem... regards, sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Daniel and ggrn3 for dropping in to have a read...much appreciated. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
~~~SIGH~~~ Ethome this has it all. I was truly enchanted. What a romantic heart I see here. Take care, Juls |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks MA for taking the time...thanks for the comment. Thank You Knight Dreams I appreciate your input. Janet my fav poet pal thanks so much..... your comments Stoned me to my soul...he he.. Thank you Claire for dropping in to read and comment. Thank you ladysixstring for taking the time to read......much appreciated. Thanks Sudhir for the fine compliment about writing, you can be sure I feel the same way about your work.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, can you see my smile? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you very much juliet for the romantic comment....have a nice day. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Excellent!, romantic, tender, loving A great poem! Liz |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sunshine I can see your smile...I had to put on sunglasses it was so bright. Thanks for the smile! Thank you Elizabeth for such endearing remarks. I appreciate it so much. |
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