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Naked, Free and Floating
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Naked, Free and Floating |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Naked, Free and Floating Skip slowly, body rise lifting eyes I fly, in air of sweet and by and by. I tickle skies feel and sprinkle time with softened ray, and slowly slip away. Naked, free and floating in breathing nature's desire. Skip air, skip sea and fade away from thee. Release the why and taste the high in naked skies and fly away with rings of bare and skip, slip away from here. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, thanks, Spitfire! Now I'm gonna be watching the sky all night tonight in case you pass by!!!  I like very much the images and sense of tranquility your poem displays... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi SpitFire... I certainly love this one!!! I always wondered what it would be like to just float through the air!! Naked floating would be quite an enjoyable experience. I think this is a great poem.......stimulates my imagination!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Wonderful imagery. -jaimie http://www.ladysixstring.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Grabbing my Peter Pan tights...wait up Spitfire.... OK one two three....arrrrrrggggggghhhhh..whack...hits the ground...OUCH...got any of that flying pixie dust and a bandaid and some asprin? LOL Wonderful poem Spitfire, "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Excuse me, bartender? I'll have whatever Spitfire is having...hee hee...make it a double....wonderful again my friend, I've a new goal for the evening....Hugs... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Balladeer, no peeking!  Thanks for comin' by my way. Take care of yourself now.~Sunny, so glad to stimulate. Thank you much. ~Jaimie, why thank you for taking the time. ~Oh and Bri,...86 the tights. Read the title. Naked, Free and Floating, if anyone is coming, this is the way it has to be. Close your eyes tilt your head back and let go. You'll soar! ~Serenity, drinks are on me. Drink up. Thanx gurl. *Peace all. |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
Oh I want to fly too......but being naked while entering into that ............Seems like I may be haning out to much.....LOL Beautiful lines here Spitfire |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful imagery here..I think we all slowed down a bit when we read it...and I'll watch the skies for sure....(actually looking for White Knight to fly by!) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
SF, I was wondering where your poem of the day was, glad I found it. This is cooool... cat... PS, I had a dream like this once.  [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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