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Forever My Knight
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Forever My Knight |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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string's of my heart embrace love for you flowing within my blood is your thought's my lip's are hungry for the taste of your's my kindred spirit, thee I have sought the breeze of fulfullment lift's our hearts' lingering above shore's of moonlight's bay our legends' will live in eternity intoxicated by love's bouquet silhouettes' tango in the moonlight among the dream's of memorie's past upon the eternal stage of enchantment echoes' of love have not been miscast beyond the misty halo of moonlight I am your lady, in your arm's, my knight |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
welcome Victoria ... a beautiful entrance you have made indeed ... you're going to love it here ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful and romantic and forever...James |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Is Victoria a Victorian lady - or one who'd rather be in Arthur's court ? your poetry is classically beautiful |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Happy ever after... it is beautiful. Love the last lines... "beyond the misty halo of moonlight, I am your lady, in your arm's, my knight" Romantic!! -jaimie http://www.ladysixstring.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Ma Miller and jmlee and wilfred,for you kind welcome's and so glad you enjoyed my writing. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Jaimie for reading. I appreciate your comments. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Shall I say  WELCOME HOME, VICTORIA with such a grand entry into this place, the best place, I hope that you enjoy your stay here... and keep amusing us readers with such beautiful works... regards, sudhir |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sudhir lyer and for all the nice smiles. Thank you for reading. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very romantic and well written flow I enjoyed the read very much...welcome to Passions! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you ethome for that friendly welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.  |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Beautiful...I love the imagery that u have put forth in this powerful piece...and to think this is your first poem on passions...wow! Looking forward to reading more "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Victoria, with this style of writing, you're going to gain much acclamation... Well Come, my dear, to Passions!!! |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Victoria Your a new member as am I. It seems you have made a big splash into Passions in Poetry with this wonderful piece. I look forward to reading many more of these vivid poetic pieces. Garfield |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
What class you display in this wonderful writing. So well done |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Lovely poem! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special message! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*with a tip of his lance* Lady Victoria, a grand welcome to thee fair Lady. . . thou hast made a masterful entrance to our party of poets, sages, and minstrels. . . it is our hope that thou wilst stay a while and be entranced by the finest songs of earth. . . I look forward to reading more of thy writing. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Victoria Welcome to Passions and you certainly made your "grand entrance" with this one. Looking forward to more. didi |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful poem, I love the theme, I have used it several times as well. The dream of the saviour knight.. catalinamoon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you very much to all of you who responded and for your kind words. I am enjoying reading your poems as well. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Beautiful first post and welcome to Passions |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you for your welcome Elosie and taking time to read. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
mmmmmm hmmmmmm Certainly enjoyed this read Welcome to Passions The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome To Passions What a great first post! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very well done Victoria ... welcome to Passions ... Hope you like it here |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Jeffrey, Lakewalker and Rex Appreciate your kind comments. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I haven't been spending too much time here lately, so I did not recognize your name. Now that I've tracked you down, I see I have missed alot. This is a wonderful piece, looking forward to reading more. Parker |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Parker. I was surprised to see this poem pop up after so long ha ha. You did track it down didnt you..So glad you enjoyed. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW what an entrance you have made. Loved it through and through. Welcome to Passions and I hope you stick around a LONG time. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I do like passions forum. I wish I had found it sooner and thank you for the nice comments. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Lovely indeed and Welcome! Marcy |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
How I ever missed this one I shall never know a belated Welcome and so glad you are among us, Victoris ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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