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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2000-08-17 03:07 PM


Hope in my closet

Shadows deep inside grow tall,
Lengthening in waning twilight,
Lively colours on outside walls
Fade with the darkening night.

Evening starts to disappear,
Hiding in a starlit blanket,
Visions begin to reappear,
Emerging from their closet.

They'd come to pay me a visit
As they'd done yesterday too,
Sometimes blurred as a deceit,
Sometimes sharp - as if true.

It's all inside my head, I know ~
Haunting memoirs of yesterdays,
They're here, nowhere else to go,
Yet hope's alive for coming days.

I know that we're all dreamers
And some of them do come true,
Some dream of golden shimmers,
While others of lovely views.

Yes, I know we're all dreamers,
And I admit dreams visit me too.
Hope in my closet is but the glimmer
I will hold on to, all life through.

~

© Copyright 2000 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-08-17 03:10 PM


sudhir, this is just beautiful...out of all the things that people keep in closets...yours contains hope...what a wonderful poet you are!
ma miller
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2 posted 2000-08-17 03:22 PM


i really like this one, Sudhir ... a good read and very flowing ... very nice.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-08-17 03:22 PM


Hopes and dreams and plans and schemes...our mind is a miraculous thing...James
Victoria
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4 posted 2000-08-17 03:35 PM


Loved it. Very nice writing.
ladysixstring
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5 posted 2000-08-17 03:41 PM


What a marvelous attitude!! Great line... "Sometimes blurred as a deceit,
Sometimes sharp - as if true."  Very well written, I really enjoyed this.  

-jaimie http://www.ladysixstring.com

brian madden
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6 posted 2000-08-17 06:11 PM


Sudhir If I was to pick out my favourite parts then I would be pasting the whole poem, it is like you looked inside my head. This poem is so true for me, the shadows falling all around but that burning light of hope that keeps them at bay. Sudhir, you can guess that I really enjoyed this poem. Excellent as always.  

"Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2000-08-18 03:42 AM


O serene one,
wonderful, maybe... poet, doubtful...  
Thanks for your lovely response...

MA,
I am glad that you likd this one... Thanks

James,
is it not? Thanks a bunch...

Victoria,
Thanks for stopping by, glad that you liked this...

Jaimie,
Thanks a bunch for coming by... and for your kind words...

brian,
My thanks as always...  

regards to all,
sudhir

Christopher
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8 posted 2000-08-18 06:48 AM


Nice Sudhir... hope... does it really exist though? Or is it just a hope that hope exists?  
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-08-18 06:59 AM


Oh, Sudhir~
I like cleaning out the closet !
Especially when there are treasures of hope !

Enjoyed this ... nicely written.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
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10 posted 2000-08-18 07:25 AM


Sudhir...another glorious write...but I expected nothing less
Meadowmuse
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11 posted 2000-08-18 07:45 AM


Sudhir, lovely shades of light and dark float through this piece. I enjoy your work so much.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


juliet_2u
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12 posted 2000-08-18 09:18 AM


Ah Sudhir, now I see what you mean about my hope chest. Very lovely as usually.
Take care,
Juls

catalinamoon
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13 posted 2000-08-18 09:26 AM


Oh, beautiful, I have the same thing in my closet. What a great description.
catalinamoon

Eloise
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14 posted 2000-08-18 09:31 AM


Sudhir, another wonderful read.  I do enjoy reading your work. You are quite the poet.  
Sudhir Iyer
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15 posted 2000-08-18 10:39 AM


Chris,
it does chris, the firefly exists in a forevered flicker... Thanks for coming by...

Marge,
I am so glad that you enjoyed this... Thanks

Paula,
WOW, glorious and as expected... thats double compliment... Thanks

Claire,
Many thanks for letting me know.. the feeling is mutual...

Juliet,
Thanks a bunch  

catalinamoon,
Thanks for sharing that little piece of info about yourself... glad that the feeling is the same ... and that this poem meant something close to heart...

Eloise,
"the poet" brought many smiles here... Thanks

Many regards to all,
sudhir

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-18-2000).]

BloomingRose
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16 posted 2000-08-18 10:51 AM


Holding on to hope...
I love the way you are able to express words with a vision.

Deb
BloomingRose

Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 2000-08-18 12:32 PM


O bloomingrose,
thank you for your time,
thank you for your response...
..sincerely

regards,
sudhir

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