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Forever Loving You (For My Wife)
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Forever Loving You (For My Wife) |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Forever Loving You When first I fell in love with you, My love was like a flame - Which burned with bright intensity, That put the sun to shame. Your gentle touch restored my soul; And, in my heart, I knew That I would spend eternity, Forever loving you. And, now, my Love, the years have passed - Each day, a shining star, Illuminates the miracle Of who and what you are. I thought it was impossible, Or merely a cliche' - Yet, now, I find these words are true: I love you more each day! And so, into the future, Dear, We two will boldly go. And, with each trial that we face, My love for you will grow. No matter where life's road may lead, Our dreams will see us through. And, in my heart and soul, I'll be Forever loving you. © Troy J Hoecherl All Rights Reserved Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh My, that was beyond beautiful! It really IS! You are a lucky person and so is your wife for the amount of unconditional love you have to offer. Wonderful writing. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Troy, this is so touching and beautiful. I am sure this had your wife crying tears of joy, she is lucky to have you, but, then again you are both lucky to have each other!  This is one of your best.Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So nice to read about love in action...a tender morsel...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
My the rythum in this poem is superb and the loyalty and devotion are explained in such a deep rooted fashion...this is excellent! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Troy, that was so eloquent! I'm glad to see you back here! Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Troy Magnificent poem. This poem was just in time. My wife had just sat down with me to read some of the poems here in Passions and this was the first one we read together. Very touching. We both loved it. Garfield |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Troy, you definitely sound like a man in love and I am sure that your wife not only knows but cherishes every moment with you. This is a beautiful and loving tribute to her and your love together...and eloquently penned. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
a superb piece of poetry and tribute, Troy... |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
These are the feelings that are prerequisite for true love... "Illuminates the miracle Of who and what you are." Perfect! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Troy~ Such a lovely piece of poetry. A pleasurable read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
WOW You must be the man of all women's dreams! What a beautiful tribute to your wife (possibly the luckiest woman on earth!) May your love for her continue to grow each day! I LOVED THIS PIECE!!!!!!!!! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such a moving testament to your devotion, Troy. This is lovely. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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