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Your Hold...To Free
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Your Hold...To Free |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Your Hold / To Free Your Hold Within my mind is the memory of the first my eyes rested upon the words that held me in your grasp. Within my heart is the rhythm of you sent to me in rushing waves every time we shared our moments of warmth and light come each morn. Within my reach is the touch of your smile the kiss of your lips the air that you breathe out and I take in as we live in each other's hold. Within each of these moments I am close to you allowing only the passage of time to intervene. Our minds and hearts flow freely as forever, I am in Your Hold. ~~~~ To Free Though penned awhile, a bit ago in name of LadySin the changes made came 'bout that time... as you were entering in. Generically, I wrote my words inspired much by hes but nothing can compare to thought of new made memories. If loving you is wrong, this day And caring thoughts, I pen Then "right", I never shall become For I can't remember when Such feelings sweeping, dusting me, as flecks arise each morn When sun breaks through the shadows' dark And thoughts of you are born. Through slatted blinds it winks at me with dusting particles I reach to touch like silk spun gold to treasure, save on spools. To weave into a cloak of love To comfort me this way If loving you is wrong, my sweet, Be this, the judgement day. Release, I will my hold on you and you, your hold on me Together we will kiss our thoughts two butterflies, to be. ©MM (Once in a ...Blue Moon) 8*2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
MMoonchild - WOW! What poignant poetry! It left me speechless - and most Passions members will tell you that's a rare condition for me, LOL! Thank you for posting these two wonderful pieces!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
MMoonchild-This is a very beautiful piece from your heart, you paint the words beautifully. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Troy, wish I could have a smoke right now (I don't smoke though) anyway..you responded as I was still working out my font sizes..*s Yes I wrote one a while ago in March I think..and this one just now finished it up..it's unusual for me to write while sitting here at the computer although for the past 3 days I have done that..usually I relax in a bubble bath or lie in bed and close my eyes or out in the sun bathing in warmth..so I don't know what's come over me except for feeling that this has become a nice place to stop and rest and write my thoughts...thank you for your speechlessness as you can tell, I am never at a loss for words, either to pen or to speak ~~soft hugs and thanks Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Gemini thank you for the warm words, they are greatly appreciated ~~soft smiles M |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
This is truly beautiful. To Free hit me like crashing into a wall, kind of what my life's been like lately. thanks Richi Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Richi You make me sigh..... ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ These are both lovely. You're spending your time well here with friends.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Marge for your nice thoughts always ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Maureen these poems are both so beautiful they truly are...they spark my emotions to the extent that they affect me physically.. ....truly wonderful writing!!! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
E. thank you always for your support by responding to my thoughts...you are a wonderful "unknown" friend ~~soft hugs M |
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