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tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

0 posted 2000-08-16 09:04 PM


With star blazing eyes she blooms in spring
While his muscles have already formed
It was not meant to be built on such innocent lies
Yet it is here that their love was born
She told of her life through wishes and dreams
And he told of his conquering quests
Yet neither of them told of their truth
It was together: they both could forget

As time passed by more words they wrote
With feelings they gave up so free
It was as if: they could not be wrong
And together, they were meat to be

She, his queen and he her king
In a land they built in stone
But neither of them had told of their truth
So they could not make it their own

The souls of fire and passion’s flames
Are embers that burnt out and died
Now both of them sit in front of the screen
As tears come on: and they cry

That line in which they dangerously crossed
Is now but a sparkle up in the sky
And even though they are miles apart
They both will look up and sigh

Time is such a treasure
Yet the wrong time can be so cruel
As passion is much more then pleasure
It can make the best of us fools

© tori 2000




If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm

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Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
1 posted 2000-08-17 01:27 AM


Oh so very true and so very well said.
Crossing ANY line can be a dangerous thing to do.
I so much enjoyed this read.  


~Sheri

tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
2 posted 2000-08-17 12:26 PM


Thank you Sheri I'm glad you enjoyed the read...

If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
3 posted 2000-08-18 07:56 PM


a lesson  in honesty - well told ~S~ - I liked this a lot


tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
4 posted 2000-08-18 10:34 PM


Thank you kindly Wilfred

If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm

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