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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-08-16 08:53 PM


In Mine Eyes

You are there
in mine eyes
simply stare
into mine eyes

do not harbor
weak goodbyes
but look direct
into mine eyes

simple come
you did just that
simply go
here's your hat.

I came clean
I told the truth
know I'm not
a teller's booth

here you are
no shining star
but here I've raised
the tell-tale bar.

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
16 August, 2000



© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-08-16 09:01 PM


and if I could add one more line, don't let the door hit you in the....nevermind...is perfect as is...I thank you for this one, Karilea.....
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2 posted 2000-08-16 09:27 PM


Just wonderful my friend. . .

The sadness of a parting. . . well told. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-08-16 09:39 PM


Serenity - well met, my friend, you're welcome!

Sven...you're back!

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