Actions really do speak louder.

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Open Poetry #9

Actions really do speak louder.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-08-16 12:19 PM

Tell me you love me.
Just to ease my fears
Tell me you still have the
same intense feelings for me.
Tell me you want me more and more.

Please tell me you love me
Say it like you mean it
look into my eyes
Tell me you love me
That there's no other.

Tell me I'm just crazy
That the way I'm feeling
Is just my irrational way
that your just tired
from all your work
Tell me you love me
but most of all show me.

Sometimes all your words
can not express just one kiss
that would show me how much if at all
you still love me.

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

1 posted 2000-08-16 01:29 PM

It is the actions and it is words that we truly need, and unfortunatly do never seem to get enough of..... very nicely writen

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-16 02:49 PM

The way I read this poem it was really intense. I enjoyed it a lot

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-08-16 03:03 PM

Nice expression of the desire to be told and shown that we are loved. My ex was famous for that...she would talk about caring and loving and I heard the words but never saw the action or felt the feelings from her...James

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-08-16 07:15 PM

thx for your replies, I often say this that actions speak louder and I'm afraid it's true for me. I'm glad you enjoyed my words. they are from my heart.

notlikely2
Member

since 2000-06-16

Posts 308
UK

5 posted 2000-08-17 05:52 AM

Nice words Rosebud...and I know that the feelings behind it are so true.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

6 posted 2000-08-17 06:38 AM

very much so from the heart...

great work again, rosebud...

regards,
sudhir

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-08-17 08:23 AM

thank you notlikely I see you are up and about this morning.. my my your on a roll ..

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2000-08-17 08:24 AM

Thank you so much sudhir I really try to put apart of me in my writings. Thank you for replying I enjoy hearing from everyone and enjoy the forum so much.

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