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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2000-08-16 12:13 PM



   Listen.....can you hear?
   Love's sweet music to your ears..
   Songs of sheer delight..


   Dance of soft desire..
   By the light of gypsy fire..
   Crackling in your sight..


   Magic spells are cast..
   Spells that for a lifetime last..
   Love is yours tonight..


   Gypsy lips you kiss..
   Savored once, a taste of bliss..
   Love forever right..


   Morning's sun arise..
   Open sleepy magic eyes..
   Chase the dark away..


   Fire has died to spark..
   Served it's purpose in the dark..
   Lit the gypsy stage..


   Evermore to be..
   Spell was cast, now you will see..
   Come the light of day..


   Love's Illusion wakes..
   Gently now, a step it takes..
   Let the music play!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-08-16 12:15 PM


Let it play,
let it play,
let it play...

Wonderful work again, Sunny

regards,
sudhir

vandana
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2 posted 2000-08-16 12:19 PM


Let the music play!!!Great poem
Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-08-16 12:28 PM


Hi Sudhir....
             We all need a little music,
             and sometimes we all need a
                   little magic!!
               Thank you, and I'm glad
                   you enjoyed...


vandana.....
             Yes......the music will
             always play, as long as
             we feed the jukebox!!!!

                Thank you, also!!< !signature-->

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
    'the Present'!




[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-16-2000).]

Auguste
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4 posted 2000-08-16 01:29 PM


Let it play, Sunny, and continue to play.  Delightful!

Michael





ethome
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5 posted 2000-08-16 01:35 PM


absolutely delightful Sunny
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-08-16 01:41 PM


Sunny1~
What an adorable little octave of Senryu ...
I like what you've done with this.
Get that keyboard out and play it girl !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Sunnyone
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7 posted 2000-08-16 04:55 PM


Hello Michael....
                 As long as you listen,
                 I will play!!!
                    Thank you for reading!

Hello ethome.... I really am glad you liked
                 it...it was fun to write..
                     Thank you!

Hello Marge.... Yes...the keyboard is out and
                waiting for my fingers!
                     Thank you!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Bill Charles
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8 posted 2000-08-16 07:15 PM


Hi Sunny,
So nice you write, fingers playing that keyboard, making gypsy music. Very nicely done, as always.

Sunnyone
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9 posted 2000-08-17 12:16 PM


Hi Bill....

     Can you just picture gypsy royalty
     dancing around the fire....I can!!
           Thank you for stopping by!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



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