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vandana
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0 posted 2000-08-16 11:57 AM


If you would be mine,
I will take you In my heart,
I will make you mine
And make you happy forever,
If you would com Into my life,
I will give whole life to you,
If,
One day,
You  decide to break my heart,
I will remember you a lot,
If you leave me
But If this day will come,
I will pray that
This day won't come,
If this would happened
to one of us,
Pray every night,
And let you go,
If you would be mine,
I will be glad to have you,
I won't be sad,
Like I used to be,
If you promise to be mine forever,
I will be fine
and take you with me,
I will give you
my heart and soul to you,
If this would happen to us,
I willl make you happy forever,
If
This would happen,
If this would......,
If......,


© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-08-16 12:03 PM


How many happenings of this world depend upon this single word "If"...
vandana, you have penned another beautiful poem...

regards,
sudhir

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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2 posted 2000-08-16 05:11 PM


lovely poem Vandana....like Sudhir mentioned how big this word if really is...enjoyable read.
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-08-16 05:27 PM


Hello vandana....

           This was a lovely poem and I
     think 'If' is a word overlooked by
     most, but is dear to the heart of a
                    dreamer!
             Beautiful, my friend!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Sven
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4 posted 2000-08-16 09:43 PM


vandana,
        you get better with every poem that I read from you. . . this was no exception. . . if only my friend. . . if only. . .

------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2000-08-16 09:49 PM


Vandana,
If is the key, with it you must turn the lock. Enjoyed

Mike
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6 posted 2000-08-16 09:54 PM


Very nice Vandana...  I enjoyed this one very much.  Well written and expressed.
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