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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 2000-08-16 09:22 AM


I just recieved my copy of "Gotta Write" magazine today with this poem of mine in it and I decided that today would be a good day to repost especially with the rash of poems glorifying suicide that have been posted and removed from the forums as of late.

Night Falls Fast

Night falls fast
and days fading light
casts shadows across the worn table
where reflections dance
in a tumbler of warm vodka.

Multicolored pills
lie scattered around
as if a rainbow crashed to the ground
leaving remnants in its wake.

One harsh, final breath
is ripped, in agonizing labor,
from a chest
that rises for the last time
then stills.

Silence rings
through the room
as darkness descends.

Night falls fast...
but for those left behind,
daylight never comes.


Some startling statistics on suicide in the US:
~Over half a million people a year attempt suicide seriously enough to require a trip to the emergency room
~Every 17 minutes someone succeeds in taking his or her own life
~Only 2-3% of all suicides occur among people with terminal illness
~Suicide is the second leading cause of death in the US among 15-19 years and college students
~1 in 10 college students and 1/5 of all high school students seriously consider committing suicide
~1 out of every 10 high school students admits to having attempted suicide

Suicide is a serious problem nation wide, but one we can all help do something about.
Learn the warning signals and recognize them in friends and family and most importantly...offer and seek help for them before it’s too late.
Suicide is never the answer!!



What lies behind us and lies before us are small matters compaired to what lies within us.
~Ralph Waldo Emerson

© Copyright 2000 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Knight Dreams
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1 posted 2000-08-16 09:52 AM


No greater truth found in words such as these.....Great message here Ruth
Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-08-16 09:54 AM


Until those that know the tragedy they blow
I will keep bumping this up 'till then...

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2000-08-16 11:05 AM


A great poem highlighting such a grave sensitive issue... WELL DONE, Ruth

regards,
sudhir

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-08-16 11:18 AM


Hoot~
Most fitting that you should re-post ...
Proud of you for the publish !  

'Night falls fast...
but for those left behind,
daylight never comes.'


This statement is so true, as my experience
in counseling with friends has proven.

Thanks for a timely post on a subject that
needs to be shared.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



vandana
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5 posted 2000-08-16 12:16 PM


Great poem,enoyed it.
ethome
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6 posted 2000-08-16 01:02 PM


I had a high school teacher that said, "before I teach a subject to a student, I teach them to have self respect." I never forgot that statement.
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2000-08-16 08:04 PM


Hi hoot_owl_rn,
I believe that this is my first visit to your place. I liked what you have written, and definately will be back for more.

By the way, you mentioned "Gotta Write" mag. How would I get hold of a copy, and what does it contain?

Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-08-16 08:31 PM


Ruth, m'friend...another 'bump' because it is so needed! If anyone can reach them, YOU can!
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 2000-08-16 08:38 PM


Thank you everyone  

Bill as far as I know, you have to suscribe or obtain it at one of the libraries that recieves a subscription. I am pleased with the journal as it contains all kinds of information on publishing and writing as well as reviews, poetry and short stories.
The address is:
Gotta Write
515 E. Thacker
Hoffman Estates, IL 60194
the price is $15/ year and it's a quarterly publication
website is http://members.aol.com/gwnlitmag/

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 08-16-2000).]

Denise
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10 posted 2000-08-16 11:02 PM


Excellent poem, excellent message, excellent poet! Congratulations, Ruth!

Denise

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11 posted 2000-08-16 11:13 PM


Excellent writing, Ruth....and congratulations on the publication. You deserve it.......
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