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0 posted 2000-08-16 07:14 AM



Oh, How I Miss You Tonight
~*Marge Tindal*~

Oh, how I miss you
and I long to kiss you
Darling, where are you tonight ?

Where are you weeping ?
What dreams are you keeping ?
Darling, where are you tonight ?

Shadows recalling,
your memory keeps falling
soft on my pillow tonight.
Where are you going
and should I be knowing
just where you are tonight ?

If dreams can remember,
then please surrender ...
darling, come to me tonight.
We'll waltz until morning
then on sunbeams dawning,
I'll release you again to the light.

You'll be free to roam
'til my dreams bring you home ...
Darling, where will you be tonight ?






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Knight Dreams
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1 posted 2000-08-16 07:17 AM


Oh Romance has not escaped you Marge.  You still have the talent to write on any subject no matter what it has been.  Good to see you still posting and writing master works.  Take care
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-08-16 07:19 AM


Marge* I love it when poetry touches my heart with the feather touch of love...this has done it!!!  Beautifully penned with grace and style...as only you can do Sweet Marge~
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3 posted 2000-08-16 09:49 AM


KnightDreams~
Grinning big time here at seeing you in
'new' suit of armor - or is that armour ?
You're full of sweet mystery !
Yep, I keep plucking out these romantic notions that come to rest gently on my mind.

ButterfliesDC~
I enjoy knowing that other heartstrings are plucked with my render ... you're a sweetie to let me know.  
~*Marge*~



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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 2000-08-16 09:53 AM


Marge, this is lovely. I love the rhyme scheme you've used in this one  
Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2000-08-16 11:03 AM


Of love and lovely...

Great work, Marge...

regards,
sudihr

Paula Finn
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6 posted 2000-08-16 11:08 AM


Marge...once again a treasure I find when I see your name...I am NEVER disappointed here
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7 posted 2000-08-16 11:25 AM


This is screaming to be set to music Marge....I can hear it even as I read.  Simply lovely.  Bonnie
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8 posted 2000-08-16 11:31 AM


OHHHH my dear Marge...you have given me a song to sing to one so dear...but alas...it must wait to be sung....Thank you so much...you are a true gift from heaven.
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9 posted 2000-08-16 01:34 PM


Hoot~
Thank ya', gal !
It's just me singing my little heart out !

Sudhir~
Thanks for stopping by for a read.

Paula~
Oh, what a sweet thing to say.
I appreciate it  

Bonnie~
Sing it, sugar !
That's exactly how it came to me.
Thank you so much for letting me know you like it.

MarkB~
It will keep until you're ready, sweetie !
Now come on, Cowboy ... 'Heaven' ?
Quit making me laugh !  
(I'm working and people will wonder what I'm up to.)

~*Marge*~


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10 posted 2000-08-16 03:12 PM


Silky smooth thoughts...too bad we become disconnected from those we care for...and find ourselves missing them...James
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James~
Yeah ... it is that !

I like 'silky-smooth' ...
sounds like a few fellas I've known in my time !  

Thanks for the read, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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12 posted 2000-08-16 03:17 PM


Marge what a gem, an absolute delight, I love this poem.   You have such a sure and certain touch, beautifully written.
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13 posted 2000-08-16 03:33 PM


This is sweet Marge, the rhyme the expression in verse you've penned here I like it  

Hugz
Coco

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Marsha~
I am so glad you enjoyed it.
It was a pleasure to sing it !

CocoBaci~
Hi, gal !
Glad you caught the rhythm -
Sing it with me !
~*Marge*~



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tori
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15 posted 2000-08-16 09:08 PM


Marge this was beautiful... as are all the words I read of your's ~truely wonderful.

If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
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16 posted 2000-08-16 09:14 PM


Marge

Get a large butterfly net and keep that dream near by.  I'm glad I stopped by!

didi

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Tori~
Thank you for your comments.
So good to see you.

DD~
I'm glad you stopped by too !
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
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18 posted 2000-08-17 08:21 AM


Aw Marge there you go again with that beautiful romantic pen swirling long graceful letters of passion and love across a dreamy poetic page of reflections....excellent!
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ETHome~
Yeah ... they sing to me and I am alive with song !

How nicely you phrase your praise !  
I appreciate you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 2000-08-17 10:29 AM


Marge--In my mind he is with you, certainly in your heart and in the romance of your beautiful poetry.
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21 posted 2000-08-17 07:11 PM


Why, Margie, I'm right here with you.
Just look around. I'm in full view.
I'm in the moon above your head...
I'm in the pillow on your bed.
I'm in the sheets that cover you
And on the ceiling over you.
I'm in the sounds of whipporwill
I'm moonbeams on your window sill.
I am the dreams you'll have tonight
I am the ray of dawn's first light.
So where am I? I'll tell you true
I am right here, surrounding you....

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22 posted 2000-08-17 07:26 PM


Marge  

Boy!!!  You've got to be proud of this one.

Garfield

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Martie~
Yeah .... I think you're right.
Thanks, my friend.

Balladeer~

'I'm in the sounds of whipporwill
I'm moonbeams on your window sill.
I am the dreams you'll have tonight
I am the ray of dawn's first light.
So where am I? I'll tell you true
I am right here, surrounding you....'


~*~
You charm me with the phrases
that fall upon my heart.
Surrounded by the knowledge
that we'll never part ...
I sleep in sweet surrender
knowing when night is through ...
I'll see the sun tomorrow
in the rapture that is you.


*Sighing deeply here ....
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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GGRN~
Thank you so much.
Glad you liked it.
I'm always pleased with what I can share with others.

Welcome to Passions.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nate Dogg
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25 posted 2000-08-17 08:48 PM


You've expressed your feeling very well, Marge. This piece has such softness to it plus it's sad too. Wonderful job and God bless Marge pen!

Nathan

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26 posted 2000-08-17 10:06 PM


Lovely versing...
A silver tongued woman... be still my heart...
wonderful poem.

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27 posted 2000-08-17 10:11 PM


This is wonderful Marge!  Excellent!!
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28 posted 2000-08-17 10:23 PM


Nate, my friend~
Thank you for your comments and for the blessing.

Mike~
I like your reply very much.
Thank you.

TennesseeAngel~
Glad you enjoyed it , Hon.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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29 posted 2000-08-17 10:48 PM


what a wonderful fantasy!
very lovely writing, ms. marge

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30 posted 2000-08-18 07:43 AM


Doreen~
Thanks ....
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Eloise
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31 posted 2000-08-18 09:14 AM


Boy that moon sure did a number
on you the other night!  LOL  
This is really lovely Marge.  I
did enjoy it.

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32 posted 2000-08-18 10:53 AM


Oh Marge... how many times have I asked myself that question. I have only my dreams...


Deb
BloomingRose

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Eloise~
That big ole' moon threw my romantic heart for a loop !
I love the spin !
Glad you enjoyed it.

BloomingRose~
Ahhh !  But the dream turns to reality - in time.  
Thank you for the reply.
~*Marge*~


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