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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
Always You ~Knight Dreams~ Yes!, It happened from the start. When we were small, and young at heart. Underneath the skies so blue The best in me was always you. You caught me with your very smile. For this has always been your style. And I know you know its true. The best in me was always you. As we grew then in high school. I stood aside and played a fool. I gave you more than just this clue. The best in me was always you. I lived to see you day by day. I traveled paths out of my way. I was there as the cold wind blew. The best in me was always you. Fifteen years from the hands of time. Never kissing you, "My only crime." Baby please, "Catch this cue." The best in me was always you. Together now and never to part. I've loved you from the very start. Days without you will be so few. Because now you know, "The best in me was always you." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KnightDreams~ 'Together now and never to part. I've loved you from the very start. Days without you will be so few. Because now you know, "The best in me was always you." Lovely, lovely thoughts. Welcome to the best family of poets and friends on the web !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions!!! What an excellent entrance!! This piece was superb...the idea, the flow and the message...Great work! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
The best in us is always you. Welcome to passions. Lovely poem Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, what a grand entrance into passions. This is a great poem. The rhythm and rhyme are near perfect and I myself happen to love the subject matter. Welcome to Passions, enjoy your stay |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome to passions...very touching,lovely romantic poem! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful lines...and now that I've caught your very first piece, I will certainly look for many, many more! A wonderful entrance into the world of Passions in Poetry...Well come, again... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
welcome to Passions...and what a grand entrance you have made. Cant wait to see more from you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS and what a grand and exquisite way to do it... WOW Many regards, sudhir |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
What a beautiful poem...wow that was so sweet and so loving, I can feel your heart and the effort you put forth in this poem...absolutely beautiful..and this is but your first poem On Passions?...I can't wait to read more WELCOME TO PASSIONS  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, this is a great poem, an amazing entrance! Welcome to Passions! I can't wait to read more of your work  |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
I am deeply honored at all the replies... Thank you as I feel welcome |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Hello and Welecome . Catching up on my reading glad I saw your post. Very nicely done. Looking forward to reading more.-------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
 Knight Dreams If you gave her this one or recited it to her, I sure she fell right into your arms. Very romantic poem. Garfield |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
Thank you all for reading |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Exquisite read!! I look forward to reading more from you! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wow! I am stunned by this brilliant poem! I look forward to reading much more from you. "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
What a great first post. Been there done that, but wasn't fortunate enough to meet up again. Beautiful and very well written. Look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Knight Dreams! What a wonderfully tender and sentimental first post. Such a happy ending ... sigh ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
I am over joyed that the family I have found among you. Thank you to all |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Let me just say EXCELLENT!!!! And welcome to Passions. You're gonna love it here. Juls |
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