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Fee
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0 posted 2000-08-16 03:59 AM


Friendships how it started.
He does not know.
I could never tell him,
My emotions I must not show.

With words we help each other,
through the good times and the bad.
Our friendships much deeper
than anyone can understand.

He's picked me up when I've been down
His friendships turned my life around.
It scares me at times the way I feel
The topics we discuss are so meaningful.

Can He see it in my eyes, when He talks to me.
The words unspoken of what could never be.



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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-08-16 05:08 AM


Fee, I know this feeling all too well.....I'd venture to say that most of us do
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-08-16 06:28 AM


Fee*
Have to agree with Jeffrey....I think most of us have been here...but that doesn't make it any easier.  Great writing ~

Wilfred Yeats
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3 posted 2000-08-16 05:56 PM


Jeffery gets a second echo - I totally agree - I have these meaningful talks - and want - and seriously doubt - it will ever be - and the pain endures - as I go back for more


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