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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2000-08-16 03:16 AM



Glory Rises


Suns glory rises
Over cobalt horizon
Diamonds kiss the sea


Dark Angel
August 2000



[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 08-16-2000).]

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jfilius
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1 posted 2000-08-16 04:09 AM


Very cute! short and sweet.


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-08-16 06:27 AM


Good one! I could visualize this!  
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Michigan
3 posted 2000-08-16 06:39 AM


DA* This is beautiful.....I'm in Haiku envy  
Jamie
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Blue Heaven
4 posted 2000-08-16 08:38 AM


Night wings see morning
in such a beautiful way
a jealous moon sets


The world loves being seen in your eyes Maree




Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 2000-08-16 09:32 AM


Maree....you've painted a magnificent picture with only 10 words  
Cerenity
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6 posted 2000-08-16 06:55 PM


Hi Dark Angel,

Very lovely can see it now in my mind, thank you its beautiful.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2000-08-16 06:59 PM


Excellent Dark Angel ... a perfect visual in so few words ... amazing!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Severn
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8 posted 2000-08-16 07:22 PM


Nicely done Mmy

K

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
9 posted 2000-08-16 07:31 PM


Dark Angel,
So much with so few. Nicely done.

Alwye
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In the space between moments
10 posted 2000-08-17 01:25 AM


such intense beauty...truly glorious.   Wonderful Haiku my friend, you have an incredible talent for these!

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Rex Allen McCoy
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11 posted 2000-08-17 01:43 AM


I have no problem picturing this thought
Well done

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