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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia

0 posted 2000-08-16 01:06 AM


   Summers Seas

To what's blue and so full of life to me
Is the endless waters of summers seas
Not a moment to rest while the water moves
Just brings truth to all I've ever known from you...

Blue is the way to my baby and sea
Like it's waves I wish she'd come back to me
Let me hold what God intended to be mine
And, let us hold each other until the end of time...

Just like my heart I feel the water rushing away
And, I see her and the waves drifting further each day
I found the summers seas of tears where it really lies
And, stare at the common wonder before these eyes...

I can never get used to what never stays
And, so I die a little more each new day
And, forgive me for the tears and the summers seas
Cause blue is still calling even stronger for me...

I always thought if I held on tight we couldn't be free
Where life expects a mother and her baby to be
So, I had to let her go just to find her again
Where blue then begins and the waters don't end...

Summers seas of tears for what remains
Tomorrow and forever I walk alone the same
So, I open my eyes to find it's so hard to breathe
And, living without her in life there's just no me...

Saun



Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-08-16 04:56 AM


Saunni~
This is sheer melancholic beauty ....

'So, I had to let her go just to find her again
Where blue then begins and the waters don't end...'

Such wistful longing.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-08-16 02:18 PM


Hey---where have you been...Writing this awesome piece no doubt.  Very beautiful and Marge said it so well so I echo her sentiments.  Stay around some girl....we miss having you around
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-08-16 02:52 PM


Wow.  This had such strong emotion when I read it, it's very good.
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