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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-08-16 12:50 PM

Thunder,rain,
Wet,tender,moist,
dripping,drops,
upon my skin,

Breathe,warm,
blowing,soft,whispers,
breathing,rhythmically,
upon my chest,

Fragrance,perfume,
smell,sweet,enticeing,
flowing,aromatically,
across my neck,

Cherry,mouth,
Moist,soft,succulant,
Tasting,kissing sweetly,
Upon my lips,

Words,whispers,
sounds,delightment,
Spoken,gently, softly,
Into my ear,

Bodies,motion,
One,together,entwined,
Moving,touching,caressing,
Skin upon skin,

Heart,love,
desire,emotion,trust,
Beating, pounding,
Upon each chest,

Wishes,Dreams,
Contentment,completement,
Passion,growing,
Love's unquenchable fire!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2000-08-16 09:49 AM

maybe this was too steamy for open 9, no one liked it ;(..maybe I should move it to adult?

Knight Dreams
Junior Member

since 2000-08-16

Posts 46
Austin, Texas

2 posted 2000-08-16 10:03 AM

Oh well I like it Romantic Heart. Passion with depth. I think it was only overlooked is all. Don't stop now.....hehe

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-08-16 10:06 AM

Lots of visuals with this one.....very descriptive, nicely done

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2000-08-16 10:08 AM

I thought it was overlooked...I was just playing around with that first comment, feeling a little frisky this morning..thanks knight!!!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2000-08-16 10:16 AM

Hoot you snuck one in...thank you girl!!!I loved your fairytale poem

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2000-08-16 02:32 PM

Overlooked but not for long....this is really hot but not too hot for us here. I am glad I was able to catch up with this. Your verse shows the passion in you and any man could only dream to receive what you have to offer. Lovely and very much filled passion. Loved the way it builds and the flow just kept me hanging in there. (short of breath but hanging in there)