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redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
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0 posted 2000-08-15 11:21 PM



How do you let them know you love them
when every minute is orchestrated
up at 6 and fed and out the door
to the bus and home again and more

chores, and homework, bath and rest
when will i get to show them?

Do they see it when im climbing the tree
throw me the rope.. I'm not scared
yes I am.. but can't let them see

Do they see it when im stroking their hair
they grin and brush my hand away
but I still think it shows I care

Do they see it when grab them hard
tackle them, tickle them. trying to be close
pretending they don't want that kiss

do they see how much I love them?


How do you show them you love them?
The things when you know.. you're "really" there in the moment.. enjoying them..
and wishing they knew how much you enjoy being in their company..

tell me.. cos I want to do more..  

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1 posted 2000-08-16 12:42 PM


I am sure that they see and know how much you love them.......give them all the love you can while you can......never know what tomorrow holds (sigh)
Bustem57
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since 2000-06-09
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2 posted 2000-08-16 01:45 AM


Your devotion to them shows the ultimate love and it will be shown back to you. I have three daughters: 22,19,& 16 and they are the apple of my eye. Hang in there!! Thank you!!
Mike
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3 posted 2000-08-17 10:32 PM


nothing to tell, for your poetry tells it all.  Very nice.
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