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The Quill's Feather [Repost #3]
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The Quill's Feather [Repost #3] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Quill’s Feather By my soul so very long ago she took me in her pink-white hands and bade me write, strand by strand. Dipping my tip in the blackest ink she put her thoughts on paper fine feelings that she shared were partly mine. She knew not my feelings when her liquid emotions flowed from my pen knowing I would write for her again, and again. She took time putting to black line her deepest passions left unheard except for these here, her written words. Penmanship extraordinaire writing with beauty, grace, flair keeping her loving words safely here. When feelings became warm she would clutch me tighter, then the feather at my top would quiver when She caught her own gasp at the lines of devotion she wrote down feelings of love she would within drown, drown. Those were the times best when quivering feather laid to rest as love’s passion had met passion’s test. circa 6 October, 1999 ©KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
By my soul so very long ago she took me in her pink-white hands and bade me write, strand by strand. Dipping my tip in the blackest ink she put her thoughts on paper fine feelings that she shared were partly mine. She knew not my feelings when her liquid emotions flowed from my pen knowing I would write for her again, and again. She took time putting to black line her deepest passions left unheard except for these here, her written words. Penmanship extraordinaire writing with beauty, grace, flair keeping her loving words safely here. When feelings became warm she would clutch me tighter, then the feather at my top would quiver when She caught her own gasp at the lines of devotion she wrote down feelings of love she would within drown, drown. Those were the times best when quivering feather laid to rest as love’s passion had met passion’s test. This is so Karilea.......I say that in the strictest words of praise. You have a special touch with your pen and I am a fan indeed and grow with every read. Loved it as you should know. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Intriguing idea and beautiful writing, sunshine  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, you are so Strict! Know that I am smiling at you! {~,^} Glad neither you, nor Balladeer, minded that it was a repost... I love to share old stuff with young'uns! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written Sunshine |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Ruth. Oft times, it is good to visit the archives and retrieve poems of such...as yours...you are a beacon... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WAY TOO BEAUTIFUL WAY TOO KARILEA... WOW regards, sudhir... repost, huh??? which one  |
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Sunshine
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Oh, do I enjoy the way too! Thanks, Sudhir! |
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