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I Will Shed You Feathers.....
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I Will Shed You Feathers..... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Will Shed You Feathers They say those that have crossed over leave a little way to give a keepsake of themselves each and every day to those that will really listen, suffer, feel and hear hearken closely to my plan and what I shall do, my dear… I shall shed feathers for you daily, singly, one by one in the darkness of the night to be seen in daylight's sun I shall leave them all around, and when you're very blue you shall see there lies a feather and know I've thought of you. I shall loose for you a feather, and recollect will spark when you pick up chestnut feathers of the lovely lark hear then there the trills and notes of its favored song and not miss me for a moment, but instead please sing along. I shall shower down a feather, before your feet shall lay a reminder that I was here to start your every day angels all around me, shall share their feathers free just so that you might know that you are here with me. So when you see a feather lightly settle down by you validate my love dear, and know that here's a clue I stroll beside you daily, I am still with you at night now think of these shed feathers, let them be a guiding light. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 15 August 2000 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your words are one of much inspiration and I love the way you coax one to read your little message in most of your works....a very good messenger you are and it does not go unnoticed.....Beautiful write my friend simply you. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Karilea, this is a beautiful and touching piece. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
" I will shed you feathers". Wonderfully unique way to show your love, my dear. Tenderly done. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sunshine, This poem made my heart rate zoom upwards! The details you have captured in this beautiful poem.... is filled with... moments and memories for me, sad though happy. Thank you for this one. Marcy |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A wonderous way of thinking about how our love ones should remember us...someone very close to me would love to read this...I think I shall show it to them. Truly beautiful and inspiring work.  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
Wonderful!! Very well written and pulls at the heart strings. Thank you !! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ And of the feathers I would find One that you had left behind Feather strokes in poet's ink Dip of quill in poet's think *You make this a nice day. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, titles do help pull one in, thank you for noticing...and for your kind words... LoveBug, thank you for telling me you've been touched... jwesley, you've touched me as well... Marcy, I received your special note, and noted it special indeed... Krista, your inspiration has fed mine, as well... Bustem, I've been known to pluck a few heartstrings, thank you... Marge! Where else would those quilled pens of passion come from, if not from angel's wings?...thank you! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is perhaps my favorite of your works, Sunshine - It's beautifully done - I like it, I like it....  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nan, thank you. I didn't know you had any favorites of mine, but that this might be one of them pleases me. I'm not as pleased as I should be over the entire piece...perhaps I didn't percolate it enough...do you have any suggestions? KRJ |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
Tender does not begin to be a proper way to speak of this.......It is very very touching. Simply lovely in each detail |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Knight Dreams...thank you for your kind words of praise... Enjoy yourself. I shall look forward to your contributions... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea, You know what? I am planning to collect money to buy a huge bill board that says "SUNSHINE - YOU INSPIRE ME EVERYDAY" till that time and even after that time these words are and will be forever etched in my heart... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, my friend...save your money...just look up! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Karilea---I have been rendered speechless...ask my hubby, that doesn't happen often!!! This is simply beautiful, such a perfect reminder to be left. I do hope you don't mind if I print this, it will bring peace to many I know. Bonnie |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bonnie, you have my blessings...today, tomorrow...and you have my thanks... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful and touching, Karilea! Denise |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Denise! See what two attorneys have done..drove me to Passions!!! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sunshine~a very touching poem. Beautiful, beautiful work. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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