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Just a Bleu Star. . . /Challenge #9
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Just a Bleu Star. . . /Challenge #9 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Sparkling in the summer sky She looks all alone She's been through a lot But still she remains Believing in the power that placed her there The power that holds her there She has seen much around her Seen planets and stars come and go The last planet to orbit her Exploded in a flash of light And was gone But now, a new planet has come Taking shape in her aura It looks to her to provide it light To provide it beauty, to provide it warmth The beings of this planet Do not worship her like those of old But rather, they give to her songs of love And she gives to them. . . of herself So she shines for them This star Her color? Not red Not yellow Not white She's. . . just. . . bleu. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I believe, I do, someone should kiss you, oh yes JustBleu... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is totally awesome.....your wording is perfect and the flow just eases us through all the way down. Read it twice...once aloud and it is exquisite indeed. Thank you for sharing this one with us. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, I don't know about that. . . but thank you my friend. . .  Mark, thank you. . . I tend to read my stuff out loud sometimes also. . . this one almost speaks as you read it. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I'm sure Bridgette will love this!  Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A bump for Justbleu. . . welcome back my friend!! ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ This is just the perfect 'coming home' gift for JustBleu ~ Wonderfully done, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ This is so tenderly beautiful and very well written Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really enjoyed this Sven. I miss sooo much at Passions. I come and go so often. No rhyme or reason to my presence. Eventually I stumble onto and find the little treasures. Bridgette |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (smiles) I just know Bridgette will cherish this beautiful gift always, for she is a star to us all! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and this is just...beautiful! |
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