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Quitting Time Again (ponderings of a broken heart)
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Quitting Time Again (ponderings of a broken heart) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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It's quitting time again tonight Much too tired to put up a fight Give in to temptation's ways Only to have heart broken and frayed Seeking some solice in a bottle again Try to find a happy place Somewhere inside The mind of this man Only to wake up ears ringing loud Try to blend nervously with the crowd Try to survive and make bigger plans Only to be back tonight at this bar again If you should pass me somewhere on the street Or if by chance we should happen to meet Don't think me poor or deserted or lonely Though I'm always alone I always have her memory [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a sad sad song Jeff...I know things are rough right now but it WILL get better |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
thank you paula i'm sure things will get better ......eventually |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh Jeffrey, I feel your sadness and broken heart in your beautiful words here. You have a very big heart, one that loves with all it has...a quality well admired. I wish I could paint the air with healing as you sleep tonight so when you wake up in the morning you will be mended and aware of the doors that have opened in your life, instead of the one that has been closed. But I can't so all I will say is my heart will say a prayer for yours tonight and hope that you hear it. Love breaks our heart but it also love that heals it.  Take Care. Jenn E |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Jenn E Thanks for the prayer God knows I need them now The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Jeffery...this one breaks my heart my dear friend. Know you are in my thoughts and please e-mail me if you wish. (((hugs))) Ruth |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Aw, so very sad, this one, Jeffrey... Take Care my friend, Sudhir |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Jeffrey, how my heart ached for you as I read this. Such saddness filled your words. I'm just so sorry you're hurting. If I was there I'd give ya big ole hug. But the best I can do is give ya big ole cyber one. Hugsssssssss Jeffrey, Juls |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
This was written after a misunderstanding with my "other" half, and posted before it was cleared up  Sorry  Thank you all for your kind words and for your concern |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Well now .... glad to see that it's patched-up. However, it was still an indepth look at the melancholy of heartache. Sometimes it's just necessary ... yanno ? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Jeffrey - Very beautifully written, my friend...and SOOOO familiar! It took me back to the time when my ex-wife and I first separated, prior to divorcing. I moved back in with my parents for a little while, and Mom took all of the prescription medicines in the house and hid them for fear that I would use them to commit suicide. Fortunately I healed with time, and now have my wonderful Pamela and sweet little Morgana - but I still remember how tough it was, at first. Thanks so much for sharing this excellent piece, my friend - I love you, man!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Interesting poem. I feel your pain. It seems to me you will be better off expressing your pain in this way instead of drowning same. Garfield |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Jeffrey-A beautiful piece from your heart, take time to heal- a lifetime. Hugs are with you my friend. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you all I appreciate your comments and your concern |
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