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Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
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Fitchburg Ma, USA

0 posted 2000-08-15 08:41 PM


A challenged person has something specail inside,
A Stuggler has no idea what to do with themselfs.

A challenger doesn't give up,
A Stuggler does give up.

A challenger can face anything,
A Struggler can't face anything.

A challenger trys new things,
A Struggler doesn't try new things.

A challenger doesn't let anything get in their way,
A Struggler does let everything in their way.

A challenger goes every where,
A Struggler doesn't go every where.

A challenger helps others in need,
A Struggler feels pity for them selfs.

A challenger gives words of wisdom,
A Struggler feels pity.

Witch one are you? A Challenger, Or A Struggler?

~*~Fairy Princess~
Age 17


Keep hope in you, Keep, dreams in you, And you'll be fine - Unknown


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 2000-08-15 09:52 PM


I LOVE THIS!!!!  You penned the differnce sooooooo well!!! BRAVO.....can ya tell I really enjoyed it   Great writing~
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2 posted 2000-08-19 03:26 AM


FairyPrincess~
Your thoughts are a blessing.
~*Marge*~


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ladysixstring
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since 2000-07-27
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3 posted 2000-08-19 03:37 AM


And the winner is...  

I can tell which of the two you are.  This is fantastic!!

-jaimie
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JnR4eva
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
4 posted 2000-08-19 03:02 PM


Don't know how this slipped by me, but a challenger you are indeed  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2000-08-19 03:09 PM



  Fairy Princess....

         Life is full of Strugglers, but I sense in you a supreme Challenger!! You wrote this with the power of a challenge, and it is truly inspirational!!  I may frame it just to help myself meet the challenges!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



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