This song (Marks Challenge)

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Open Poetry #9

This song (Marks Challenge)

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-15 05:03 PM

To touch my heart
so well you have done,
for sweet words do impart
our small victory won.
On the eve of existance
when the stars sang out,
we sat in silence
as the colors did surround.
And I rememberd a man
who gave this world joy,
through the music he made
and the way he did employ.
For one that gives memories
to those that can see,
singing of an old guitar
and the joy of his feelings.
As I brought my guitar out
placed it in your hands,
moved over strings
at hearts command.
Palms of sweat
and eyes of tears,
anxieties were met
easing our fears.
So rest your soul
upon that song,
and remember that eve
you shall never be alone.

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

1 posted 2000-08-15 05:18 PM

So rest your soul
upon that song,
and remember that eve
you shall never be alone.

so very beautiful, MG
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

2 posted 2000-08-16 04:30 AM

Thankyou Maureen, I do so enjoy hearing from you......

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-08-16 04:41 AM

Michael, Haven't read any of your work before. I really liked the flow of it.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-08-16 09:56 AM

Michael....as lovely as I knew it would be. Your song is one of beauty and heart. Thank you for your taking the challenge and meeting it in leaps and bounds. Not only a gold medal but a gold record as well

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2000-08-16 11:25 AM

Your words make a song all their own Michael. Challenge well met!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

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