a piece of the truth... for my wife

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T McCoy
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 186

0 posted 2000-08-15 03:17 PM

i'm so sick and tired
of only being inspired
by late night desires
that i only acquire
by starting a fire
in my mind like a liar
reconnecting the wires
of pain and depression
to find words i'll admire
but it's really not in me
i'm really not that deep
i only think of a sentence
when i'm alone
and on no sleep
and yea i've got sentiments
they're real here inside me
but i can't write about love
when i can't even hold you
and only gaze in your eyes
in a photograph of you
and i'm so sick and tired
of my late night desires
to become inspired
and write words they'll admire
cuz it's really not in me
i've been feeling good lately
so i need you to know
before i am through
what all of my words
should not mean to you
i'm not really that lonely
or depressed all damn day
in fact i'm feeling quite good
in some strange little way
i'll no longer search for words
just to have something to say
even though i do miss you
at the end of the day
my eyes are wide open
i'm not frozen in time
i'm not walking to florida
i ain't quite lost my mind
my memory is okay
it's not jammed on rewind
i think of you reading my words
and crying out loud
and that's not fair to you
that won't make you proud
so know that i'm happy
and i'm making my way
and ignore all my words
i have nothing to say
except that i love you
a little more everyday
i smile when i think about you
and i'm doing okay
and that's all that should really matter
to you...

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-08-15 03:33 PM

~Such an open and honest expression from within. Simply,...Touching! T...thank you for sharing this and take care. *Peace.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-08-15 04:19 PM

Wonderful sentiments...its nice to have someone to bring a smile to your face..even if many miles away...James

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

3 posted 2000-08-15 04:22 PM

Yes this is very touching. Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

ronnocxer
New Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 1

4 posted 2000-08-15 04:34 PM

WILL YOU PLEASE CALL ME?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-08-15 04:54 PM

For god's sake, man, CALL HER.

and this is terrific, made me weep with envy.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

6 posted 2000-08-15 04:59 PM

A poetic disclaimer for you wife......and then some!! Awesome work! I think the message is clear this time.....

so know that i'm happy
and i'm making my way
and ignore all my words
i have nothing to say
except that i love you
a little more everyday
i smile when i think about you
and i'm doing okay

My favorite message of all...I can't wait to see what you write when you get home to Flordia with her!! WOW~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2000-08-15 05:04 PM

WOW-such a love you have and you leave no doubt as to where your heart is.....wonderful piece and the message is so clear...now if you are able...I agree..go call her. very sweet.

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

8 posted 2000-08-15 05:06 PM

well seems like they all want you to call her..and since I don't know the story I will just say I loved the poem
~~soft smiles and best wishes T
Maureen

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

9 posted 2000-08-16 12:21 PM

So full of emotions here. Your heart is docked my friend and it is very apparent where.......I also do not know the story but follow your heart......if it says to call her, then please listen. Funny in this place how start to feel such concern and friendship for people you have never met. But through your words I feel like your a friend and I hope everything works out for you and your family. That, is from my heart to yours.
Jenn E

T McCoy
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 186

10 posted 2000-08-16 04:39 AM

okay this is just a general thanks to all so much...and i called her...i didn't realize it had been a month...yea i know...i suck..
sorry hun!

again thanks to everyone...and Jenn...i know what ya mean!

Tony

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2000-08-16 04:58 AM

Sometimes you have what you need and can not be near it. The words you speak are true and you do feel them, It does not mean that you are not happy with what you have and the words you write are not written to hurt anyone but to wake yourself up to what you have. I have been there and feel that.
Glad you rang her and all is well.
Fee

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