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Sometime, Somewhere
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Sometime, Somewhere |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Sometime, Somewhere Somewhere in the sphere of time Beyond the hour that is mine There is a love awaiting me In echoes of eternity Our paths this time were not the same He has no vision of my name But he is quietly aware That somehow I will meet him there There between the great divide Of heaven and earth, on either side We’ll know at once the presence of The splendor of a destined love Some time in future’s other place We’ll come together face to face Eye to eye and mind to mind Two hearts will know the honored time He patiently awaits for me On other shores beyond the sea In silence of life’s interim I patiently will wait for him Elizabeth Santos |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Wow, this is really good. I am honored to be the first one to respond to this. Nice job and keep up the good work. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
such a sweetly tender write...so expressive and yearning |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Once again you fill my mind with pictures, your poetry is great  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
OOOHHHH Liz..if I could only tell you how much I needed this. You have touched more than one heart today as I will share and with your talent and grace of words you give us so well...I KNOW it will be heard for all it's worth....Thank you so much for your wonderful works..... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sigh's aloud I read this one and you carry me on cloud. Liz, your talent of expression is so full of grace and style and each one you share brings me to smile. Truly, I adore this one it rings home to me rite now and it's a keeper for me in my private library. Coco |
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jfilius Junior Member
since 2000-08-14
Posts 29 |
You wrote this so well!!! If I were this guy, I know right where my path would be heading! good luck I hope he finds you!! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh this is beautiful, I too believe in destiny and souls that search through lifetimes finding one another again....wonderful poem! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Our paths this time were not the same He has no vision of my name But he is quietly aware That somehow I will meet him there" Oh Liz, this poem struck some hidden chords in my soul. It really touched me. Thank you for posting this. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Angel Girl, Thank you very mucg Paula, THanks for the comment Lakewalker, Your remarks are very kind Mark, I am so pleased that you are touched by my poem Coco,Thank you for wanting to keep this poem. That is the highest praise jfilius, Thank you, jfilius, you are very easily swayed by the written word, or let's say, very passionate about poetry poutprincess, I'm so glad someone understands. Thank you Lovebug, I'm glad you like this. Quite deep thoughts for such a young lady Thank you so much for your comments, dear Liz |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Elizabeth, this is so amazing, astounding, it's truly perfect. Destiny, fate, kismet, I really believe that somewhere somewhen there is the one true heart. Hold the dream right! Beautifully written.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--I know you know how much I would love this...shades of another wonderful poem...you are amazing my dear friend...Hugs! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Stunning Liz! Just incredibly, and most beautifully penned ... these sentiments display the feeling of a destined love with such brilliance. Lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautifully done, Liz.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lady Elizabeth, your love is showing... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marsha, Martie, Kit, Balladeer, Sunshine Your words mean so much to me. Thank you all for your lovely comments Liz |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
'lizabeth I liked this much...but somehow, I think most things if not all happen pretty much by chance!!!!  }Unless of course Divine intervention is in control. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You never responded to this poem so if you missed it i'm sending it here. This poem you wrote is a treasure. Sent upon the wind Twilight layers the azure lie Euphoria spreads the sky. Whispering censure in the breeze Talking to the brooding trees. Standing o'er the forest green Shaking leaves at things unseen Filtering light in wild coquette. Kismet of illusions net. Read the sounds upon the vale Listen close to breaths inhale The symbols hieroglyphic swell The weeping deep within the shell. Twilight plays a subtle mean It speaks of things that are for glean. My heart is full of verse and sign I can but treasure it as mine. Rest well within the gardens scene Forever, rules my mystery queen. Love Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
RobertB, Of your two hypotheses, I choose the second. Thanks so much for reading and commenting Sy,How did I miss your exquisite poem/Thank you for posting it here for me. It is lovely. Somtimes great poems fly back to the 2nd or 3rd page and I miss them completely THank you for commenting on this poem Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ This is a lovely post .... you know my feelings on the 'beyond' ... the 'meetings' go on ... *Seymour .... Oh, my ... I must go find that lovely post as it surely deserves it's own reply. I'm glad you left it here ... I shall find my way to it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, Yes, the meetings go on in a never ending cycle. Glad you liked the poem and how did Sy's poem slip through? I see you found it. I'll be right over Liz |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! I love the flow here |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Guess what I found as a synonym for wonderful: goodly, noble, precious, mighty, profound, intense, consummate, rank, roaring, thumping, extraordinary,important unsurpassed, supreme, complete,august, grand, dignified, Elizabeth Santos, sublime, majestic, vast, immense, enormous, towering, stupendous, prodigious, astonishing, incredible, marvelous..... ... see it fits... This is you... ... regards, sudhir |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Beautiful. Haunting. Lovely. Linda M. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Passing shadows, Thank you so much for your remarks Sudhir, Can I borrow your thesaurus? Or I could just refer back to your comments You really make me laugh sometimes. You are something else, a terrific cheer leader, that's for sure. Thank you for all the wonderfuls Linda, I love the words haunting and beautiful used together. That's a wonderful compliment to this poem Thank you Liz |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Absolutely exquisite - I can pay you no higher compliment than to say I wish I'd written it myself (genders switched of course) And of course it speaks to and for me. |
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